Hello! Could you help me to correct this paragraph? (PART II) Thanks in advange! :)
As for my ideal job in the future, I really want to both have a nice, useful, clean, safety and colorful lab and be in a good team because most important thing is has a harmonius team for variety experiments. On the other hand if we look at future, scientists will be doing amazing researches because of developing technology. For example we will access to knowledge, will contact on other researcher and will be going to the lab easly and we can also spend less time for all of things.

Consequently if we look at scientific develop in the past and future, we can say that we are hopeful for scientific news. However we musn’ t forget only thanks to people who love their job we can preceed at the future.

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Hello! Could you help me to correct this paragraph? (PART II) Thanks in advange! :)
As for my ideal job in the future, I really want to both have a nice, useful, clean, safety and colorful lab and be in a good team because most important thing is has a harmonius team for variety experiments. On the other hand if we look at future, scientists will be doing amazing researches because of developing technology. For example we will access to knowledge, will contact on other researcher and will be going to the lab easly and we can also spend less time for all of things.

Consequently if we look at scientific develop in the past and future, we can say that we are hopeful for scientific news. However we musn’ t forget only thanks to people who love their job we can preceed at the future.

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Thank you very much Himadry, I like your new sentences. It was very useful for me.
Greetings!

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As for my ideal job in the future, I really wish to possess a  clean, safe and colourful lab and wish to work with a good team because the most important thing is to have a harmonious team to conduct various experiments. On the other hand, if we look further in the future, we can assume that scientists would be conducting amazing research given the expected high technological progress. For example, presumably, we would have access to profound knowledge, would have a better cooperative environment among international researchers, availability of the labs are expected to increase and would take less time due to increase in efficiency among the researchers.
Consequently, if we look at the scientific development in the past, we could expect a better forthcoming period. However, we must not forget, " we would be able to proceed further in our field only if we love our job wholeheartedly"

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