describing a graph

The graph compares average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four European countries from 1967 to 2007.
In 1967 the United Kingdom released by far the largest amount of carbon dioxide, with 11 tonnes per person, on in average. In Sweden and in Italy, the average carbon dioxide released per person was 9 tonnes and 4.5 tonnes respectively, while in Portugal much less carbon dioxide was released( just over 1 tonnes).

However, during this 40-year period the carbon dioxide emissions in the United Kingdom fell gradually to approximately 9 tonnes, While the carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and in Portugal showed an upward trend, with 7.5 tonnes and 5 tonnes in 2007, respectively.

The emissions of carbon dioxide in Sweden fluctuated more dramatically: they increased , it incresed to around 11 tonnes in 1980, with a sharp decrease to about 5 tonnes. And the figure was just the same for as that in Portugal.

We can also see from the graph, UK remained the nation to release  the first who released the largest amount of carbon dioxide per person on in average , while Italy overtook Sweden and became the second.

ESSAY: Should rap music with violent lyrics be banned?

It is undeniable that music has the power to change people, change the way they think and behave. Therefore it is often asked: Should rap music with violent lyrics be banned? I don’t think so.

It is true that children and teenagers constitute the biggest percentage of the fans followers of such music; being young, they are easily influenced. hence, they are easily corrupted. From listening to the music, they form the wrong idea about  it, they can get a wrong idea of women, violence, sex and drugs and see  that as a ‘cool’ lifestyle. What Which kid wouldn’t want the kind of life they see in these music videos: ; hot, bikini-clad girls in bikinis chilling beside a in a pool, alcohol everywhere, and a mansion with enough guns to equip an army.  start a museum?

However, Nevertheless, rap music should not be banned because doing so goes against freedom. Not only the freedom of artists who want to express themselves but also the freedom of everyone. Nobody has the right to tell us what we can and cannot listen to. Furthermore, If they government were to censor music for being violent, for the same reason they would also have to ban horror or action movies, then novels… it would have no end.

To conclude, I strongly believe that music should never be banned, irrespective of its violent or strong message, because it is a form of expressing people’s feelings and because everyone should have the freedom to listen to whatever they like. has the freedom of listening to what they like.

Sleepy Hollow

It says that in a segregated place to civilization circulate a history about hourse rider that used to do his round at night in a beautiful horse. The people shocked ask themselves ¿What a men so weirdo, why does he do that?, because that is not regular someone get out at night and to do those rounds.

My version:

In a remote place, there is a story about a man who used to ride around at night on a beautiful horse.  The shocked  residents said to themselves "What a strange thing to do, why does he do that?"  It's not normal that someone would ride around on a horse in the middle of the night.

Is it from The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving.  Read it many years ago.  A classic.  (and that was a sentence fragment.)

The Scorpion

I heard a beautiful story from someone who had a complex relationship with wealthy people.  and He described that it was like what happened between the scorpion and the frog. The story started when the scorpion said:
"My brother, can you please carry me on your back to the other side?"
He was asking the frog to help him to cross the lake. The frog was afraid because he was a / had a caution of scorpion.
He said :" I love my brother but I have to stay away from you, because you have a very sharp stinger unjust needle.
But the scorpion was very clever.  on persuasion.
He said, "My brother, How can I sting you while you are carrying me? I don't know how I will do that while you were carrying me, And I don't want to die, my brother, because I don't know how to swim."
the frog said: OK,
and quickly the scorpion jumped on his back.
And while they were crossing to the other side the frog felt a sting something hurt him in his back, and said: Why did you do that, my brother?
now we will both die. dying.
The scorpion pulled himself and said, "What I can do, that's my nature.".

Haze in China

China is an economic power, that has experienced great economic growth in recent years.  But pollution in China has become more and more severe, but it seems that no one cares. Everyone talks about pollution, but life continues as usual; kids go to school, and adults go to work daily. A Lot of reports and research online relate lung cancer, which has been increasing in this country, but no action has been taken to decrease pollution. It is so sad to be living in this very smoggy city.

I watched a video about how the government governs our society.  It might make sense that is why there is no one cares about the haze in china. [I don't understand what you mean here.}

That video is about the maximizing the economy. For example, we all know that smoking causes lung cancer and other related diseases, our government warns the public not to smoke, but they don’t ban smoking and never take cigarette manufacturers to  jail. They also make cigarettes available to any adult. Why do they do that? Firstly, if you are a smoker, you will pay tax to the government by purchasing cigarettes. Secondly, if you smoke for decades, you might die 10 years earlier then the life expectancy. That means it will save a large amount of money in pensions for the government. Thirdly, someone may ask, smokers may need more medical care and would cost more money from the government for the heath care.  No way.  The government has calculated that average smokers only need heath care for 3 or 5 years, then they die.  Three  or 5 years of health care is only half the cost that has been paid by the government. Another half of the money has been paid by the patients themselves, compared to 10 years of  pension, it is a small amount of money. With the goal of maximizing the economy, they might not want to ban smoking in our society.

The haze in China has causes many premature deaths, if we can shut down half of the factories, we are sure we can save more lives from the haze, but no one has this kind of idea, it might be all of us embody with the economy maximum theory. What if we have made a big amount of money and we don’t have a chance to spend it? It that a irony we don’t have enough time to spend the money we’ve made?

Happy new year,good luck for all of you

Yesterday,which is the last day of 2016,I have just finished my last exam of third-year semester in university,maybe the rusult,I mean the scores or GPA, would not be ideal as I expect,but I have try my best, so let it goes. From the result of the course called Mechanical Design, I find I am anything but a Mechanical Engineer since I have no talent in Engineering drawings.Maybe I shoud choose EE or CS as my major. After all,I prefer coding to drawing.

My version:

Yesterday, the last day of 2016, I finished my last exam of my third year in university.  [In US, we call third year junior year.]  Maybe my grades won't be as high as I had hoped, but I have tried my best, so I let it go [or, so I'm not worrying about it].  Based on my performance in a course called Mechanical Design, I would say that I am not suited for Mechanical Engineering; I have no talent for engineering drawing.  Maybe I should choose electrical engineering or computer science as my major.  I say this because I prefer coding to drawing.

My advice: Major in what you enjoy and are good at.  May God be with you.

Hello

I'm practise English every single day, because I have a desire to become fluent in English. Sometimes is a little hard to study, and I give up a few times, but after that period I aways return to study. We must to discovery a fun way to learn a new language, and enjoy the process of learning.

My version:

I practice English every single day because I want to become fluent in the language.  Sometimes it's a bit hard to study, and sometimes I give up.  But I always return to studying.  I need to find a fun way to learn a new language, so I can enjoy the process.