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A beautiful message For to live better, dont be worry, be occupy occupy your time, your space, your mind dont despair,wait. wait to lower the dust, wait the time passes, the rage too dont be indisposed, disposed. disposed of words good, vibration good, be disposed always. Rest your mind, your legs, rest everything Dont depreciate, appreciate Appreciate for quality, values and virtues. Dont be disturb, be acommodated With your body, your spirit, your life. Dont distrust, trust! Trust in your sixth sense, trust in you, trust in God. Dont torture, endure. hold on with pacience, with tolerance and resignation. Dont press, be impress. Impress for humility, simplicity and elegance. Dont make discord, make concord! Concord among nations, among persons, personal concord. Dont mistreat, treat well. The persons, animals, Treat well the planet. Dont be overload, recharge. Recharge your forces, courage, your esperance. Dont disturbe, work. Work your humanity,your frustation, and virtues Dont conspires, inspire Inspire the persons, talents,health Dont to frighten, pray! Pray to God.So we will live better days.

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A beautiful message

To live better, don't worry, stay occupied

Occupy your time, your space, your mind
dont despair, wait.
wait for the dust to lower, wait for the time pass, (and) the rage too.
dont be indisposed, disposed.
disposed of good words, good vibrations, be disposed always.
Rest your mind, your legs, rest everything
Dont depreciate, appreciate
Appreciate quality, values and virtues.
Dont be disturbed, be acommodated
With your body, your spirit, your life.
Dont distrust, trust!
Trust in your sixth sense, trust in yourself, trust in God.
Don't torture, endure.
hold on with patience, with tolerance and resignation.
Don't press, impress.
Impress others with your humility, simplicity and elegance.(?) 
Dont make discord, make concord!
Concord among nations, among persons, personal concord.
Dont mistreat, treat well.
The persons, animals, treat the planet well.
Dont be overloaded, recharge.
Recharge your forces, courage, your esperance (esperança? Hope?).
Dont disturbe, work.
Work for your humanity,your frustation, and virtues
Dont conspire, inspire
Inspire people, talents, health
Dont be frightened, pray!
Pray to God. So we will live better days.
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A beautiful message

For to live better, dont be worry, be occupy keep busy
occupy your time, your space, your mind
don't despair, be patient wait.
wait 'till the dust settles to lower the dust, wait for time and rage to pass the time passes, the rage too
dont be indisposed, disposed.    I'm not sure what you mean here.
disposed of words good, vibration good, be disposed always.
Rest your mind, your legs, all of you rest everything
Don't deprecate depreciate, appreciate
Appreciate for quality, values and virtues.
Don't be easily disturbed disturb, be acommodating 
With your body, your spirit, your life.
Don't distrust-- trust!
Trust in your sixth sense, trust in yourself   you, trust in God.
Dont torture, endure.
hold on with pacience, with tolerance and resignation.
Dont press, be impress.
Impress for humility, simplicity and elegance.
Dont make discord, make concord!
Concord among nations, among persons, personal concord.
Dont mistreat, treat well.
The persons, animals, Treat well the planet.
Dont be overload, recharge.
Recharge your forces, courage, your esperance.
Dont disturbe, work.
Work your humanity,your frustation, and virtues
Dont conspires, inspire
Inspire the persons, talents,health
Dont to frighten, pray!
Pray to God.So we will live better days.
1

A beautiful message

To live better, don't be worry, be occupied (or "keep busy")
Occupy your time, your space, your mind
Don't despair, wait.
Wait for the dust to settle, wait for the time to pass, the rage too
Don't be indisposed, disposed*.
disposed of good words, good vibrations, be disposed always.
Rest your mind, your legs, rest everything
Don't depreciate, appreciate**
Appreciate the quality, values and virtues.
Don't be disturbed, be accommodated
With your body, your spirit, your life.
Don't distrust, trust!
Trust in your sixth sense, trust in yourself, trust in God.
Don't give in***, endure.
hold on with patience, with tolerance and resignation.
Don't press, be impressive.
Impress for (or "Impress with your") humility, simplicity and elegance.
Don't make discord, make concord!
Concord among nations, among persons, personal concord.
Don't mistreat, treat well.
The people, animals, Treat the planet well.
Don't be overloaded, recharge.
Recharge your forces, courage, your hope/endurance.
Don't disturb****, work.
Work on your humanity,your frustration*****, and virtues
Don't conspire, inspire
Inspire the people, talents, health
Don't to be frightened, pray!
Pray to God.So we will live better days.



*=these aren't words we would use every day. I think. Looking at the context I think I would say "don't be unready, be ready... ready for good words..."

**="depreciate" is a very unusual and very specific word in English. Maybe an alternative would be "don't be ungrateful, be grateful"

***="torture" definitely isn't the word you want here!

****=or "don't be distracted"

*****="frustration" doesn't look right here. Humanity and virtues are good thing but frustration is a bad thing. Maybe you mean "patience". Patience is the ability to deal with frustration and it is usually seen as a virtue.


Wise words as we head into the Trump era!

Your English is really good. I can see a lot of the errors are the result of you trying to use poetic words, especially in those pairs of verbs, but don't worry, poetry is always really difficult, and very different from normal spoken English.

Parabéns! 

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