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    December 27, 2016
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    Affordable Education for Our Sons

    Hi Everyone ! I would like to share about my children's future. I am 38 year old and I have 3 children: twin brothers are 16 year and the younger one is 6 year old. I feel very happy because they all get along each other even though they are 2 different generations. I and my wife have to work hard to afford a good education for them. I think that the best thing that we parents can do for our children is to provide a good education because nobody can remove the wisdom from them. This is a big challenge for us and I think that we are making a good job.

    I hope we can save enough money necessary for them.

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    December 27, 2016
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    December 27, 2016
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    Is anybody there who can help me polish this sentence?

    According to the geometrical relationship of the mentioned points, a database was constructed to lodge the data based on following properties of the layout;

        1) the distance of every pair of adjacent points,

        2) the angle formed by a point and its neighboring points and

        3) the sequence arrangement of them.

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    December 27, 2016
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    I`m so happy today!

    I`m happy because I found this web site.
    I`m afraid of communicating in English as my English ability is not so good. So I will study English here and watch youtube.
    I work in a laboratory.

    (here needs leading English well.)?

     I will do my best.

    Please correct these sentences.

    thanks!

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    December 27, 2016
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    Please help me with my letter:)

    Dear Mona,

    I'd like to suggest you to take bus no.40 rather than coming by foot. Kindly follow the following directions to reach my home from the bus station.

    Take the first turn on the left which will take you on Kanatnaya street, then go down the street and on the left side you will see a big fountain you should keep going. When you come across a big green square turn right.
    You will see Nevskaya street. It is a narrow street with numerous shops, you should go through this street and on the opposite side of the yellow Church turn right.

    Please go past the big cinema and huge green supermarket next to it, take the second turn on the right and near a pharmacy you will see my house which displayed the unit number 37.

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    December 24, 2016
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    Presentation letter part 2/2

    In addition, I have advanced knowledge in English and German. I am able to attend the oral and written requirements. Moreover, I have basic French skills in both written and oral comprehension, as well as a great ability to learn languages.

    I would like to join your company to add my work experience in order to perform a successful tasks and to be able to prove my competences in plumbing.

    So, I would like to have an opportunity to get an appointment to discuss with you. I can commence work in the mid of January 2017.

    Thank you for your attention.

    Your sincerely,

    José García Martínez

    PS: I have attached curriculum vitae for your perusal.

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    December 22, 2016
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    Sport and me

    For the start, I want to mention that I have an asthenic body type with a very fast metabolism, in other words I have no muscles. That’s my excuse why I’m hopeless with any sport. My teacher of physical education at school used to call me a dreamy lily. However, I had made a few attempts to become a sportswoman until  I realized it’s just not my area. My first experience was an athletic. In a few lessons, I learnt to jump over a vaulting buck and even started to climb up a rope before I only could successfully cling to it. Unfortunately, it turned out that our trainer was a drunk and stopped turning up on our lessons. My next try was skiing. My aunt’s family went to a cross-country skiing every winter weekend so I joined them. The place was hilly so half the time I was sliding down the hill on my backside. However, the way up the hill was even more “fun”. Normally you should speed down the hill in order to slide up half the way up next hill then put your skies nearly perpendicular and run remaining distance up the hill. In my case, I ended up on my backside or otherwise with my skies will not be perpendicular to each other instead of being horizontal. So, I moved up the hill without my skies more often. However, after some practice I started to ski more or less successfully and even bought skies of my own few years ago. Nevertheless, I don’t use them very often. In this case my excuse is absence of snow for almost all the winter for past few years. However, I didn’t lose hope and my last attempt turned out to be more or less successful. I took private swimming lessons. As a result, I not only acquired swimming skills but also a habit to go to swimming pool quite often. I’m not so hopeless after all I just needed to find my favourite sport.
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    December 22, 2016
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    The colourful sky

    I like the sky.Today's morning I see the beautiful sky when I wake up . Tha sun rise and the sky turns red as if it burns.
    The color attracted me. However we may not see the same colour again as it changes so quickly.
    I am not tired of watching the sky.
    I think it is a great natual painter and appeal me with it's vivid colours.
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    December 20, 2016
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    December 20, 2016
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