Please help me with my letter:)

Dear Mona,

I want to warn you that you can't reach my house by feet, you should use a bus with the number 40. So I give you the route from the bus station to my house.
You have to take the first turning to the left, which will take you to the Kanatnaya street, then you have to walk down the street and you will see on your left side a big fountain, here you have to keep going. When you come across a big green square, turn right.
You will see the Nevskaya street, which is a narrow street with a few shops, you have to walk down this street and then opposite the Yellow Church, you have to turn right.
Go past the big cinema and the big, green supermarket next to the cinema and take the second turning to the right and finally near a pharmacy you will see my house with the number 37.

You have done a great job!

Dear Mona! I want to prevent that you can't reach don't want you to go to my house on foot*. You should use a bus number 40. So I'll give you directions from the bus station to my house.
Take the first turning on the left, which will take you on to Kanatnaya street, then go down the street and on the left side you will see a big fountain. Keep going. When you come across a big green square, turn right.
You will see Nevskaya street. It's a narrow street with numerous shops. You should go through this street and opposite yellow Church** turn right.
Go past the big cinema and big green supermarket next to it. Take the second turning on the right and you will see my house (number 37) near the pharmacy.

* It sounds more natural :)

** I'm not sure, what do you what to write here. It can be either:
- and on the opposite side of the yellow Church turn right.
or
- and turn right before the yellow Church.
The meaning of those is different though.

I hope, you friend reaches you :)

Please help me with my letter:)

I'd like to suggest you to take bus no.40 rather than coming by foot. Kindly follow the following directions to reach my home from the bus station.

Take the first turn on the left which will take you on Kanatnaya street, then go down the street and on the left side you will see a big fountain you should keep going. When you come across a big green square turn right.
You will see Nevskaya street. It is a narrow street with numerous shops, you should go through this street and on the opposite side of the yellow Church turn right.

Please go past the big cinema and huge green supermarket next to it, take the second turn on the right and near a pharmacy you will see my house which displayed the unit number 37.