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Afford Education to Our Son Hi Everyone ! I would like to talking about the future. I am 38 year old and I have 3 children. Twin brothers with 16 years and the younger with 6. They all get along and I feel very happy because are 2 different generations. I and my wife have to work hard to afford a good education for them. I think that the best that we parents can do for our sons is provide a good education because it is a thing that nobody can remove for them. This is the big challenge for us and I think that we are making a good job. I hope keep its for a time necessary for them.

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Afford Education to Our Son

Hi Everyone ! I would like to talking about the future. I am 38 year old and I have 3 children. 16 YEARS OLDTwin brothers with OF 16 years and the younger  with  ONE IS 6. They all get along and I feel very happy because THEY are 2 different generations. I  ME and my wife have to work hard to afford a good education for them. I think that the best that we parents can do for our sons is TO provide a good education because it is a thing that nobody can remove for  FROM them. This is the  A big challenge for us and I think that we are making  DOING a good job. I hope keep its for a time necessary for them.


i think i made a mistake or two, but i dont know for sure.  I used A not THE because i think you did not point any other challenge besides providing good education for them, since A is used for something general, and THE is used for something particular, please correct me if im wrong in any way.

 

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Affordable Education for Our Sons

Hi Everyone ! I would like to share about my children's future. I am 38 year old and I have 3 children: twin brothers are 16 year and the younger one is 6 year old. I feel very happy because they all get along each other even though they are 2 different generations. I and my wife have to work hard to afford a good education for them. I think that the best thing that we parents can do for our children is to provide a good education because nobody can remove the wisdom from them. This is a big challenge for us and I think that we are making a good job.

I hope we can save enough money necessary for them.

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