My favorite film<inception></inception>

My favorite movie is a science fiction film “Inception”. This film was directed and wrote written by Christopher Nolan .

The film was talked  is about a thief played by Leonardo DiCaprio, who steals corporate secrets through the use of dream-sharing technology. He is given the inverse task of planting an idea into the mind of a CEO.

I saw this movie with my intimate close friend in at the cinema .I did not clearly fully understand some plots some of the plot when I was watching it. And I had many doubts about the plots the story. Even so, I was still shock about this story  the story shocked/surprised me. changing my logic.

We always make dream where we can mistake for a real world in diary life. When we have a very vivid dream, we can mistake it for the real world. It’s really interesting ,when you are asleep, you can create an entirely new world. I've seen the movie more than 2-3 many times/over 3 times .The story is excellent, the plot, acting dialogues and all other aspects of the movie are superb. The movie deeply shocked me and it is my favourite movie I have ever seen. my favourite movie. /the best movie I have ever seen.

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Hi there! I hope these corrections help you out a little bit, I spent a bit of time on them. You have a really good command of English, there was just a few tense problems and vocabulary issues.

One thing I want to really point out is that intimate friend is not used in English, we say close friend or dear friend. Intimate is generally used regarding other things.

Apart from that, I wish you all the best for your English studies!

Today is a good day

After a busy day, I went out for dinner with my colleagues. We eat ate Pork Sliced Boiled Chicken, it tastes tasted excellent. I think I'll come back later another time/again.Then, we went to the a tea shop. The shop fit to chat that have a good environment.The conversation is very helpful to my work.  The tea shop was a pleasant place to have a chat with friends/colleagues. The conversation that we had was very useful regarding my work.

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That was a really good piece, just a few problems regarding the tense! As the other correction mentioned, once you start a text with the past tense and continue the description, you must keep it in the past tense. You seemed to know this as you switched back into the past tense halfway through, but just try and remember. 

- I want to quickly explain why I changed "I think I'll come back later' to "I think I'll come back again/another time", I did this because putting "later" gave the impression that you would be going back on the same day. Saying again (or) another time avoids any confusion.

Hope this helped, best of luck with your studies!

Second text

My typical day.
I wake up early at six thirty. I get up and I have a shower. I make the breakfast at ten to seven and I have breakfast. I do exercise at twenty past seven and I get dressed. I go to work at eight o’clock. I start to work at nine o’clock. I have a dinner at one o’clock to two o’clock from one o'clock to two o'clock. I finish to work at six o’clock then I meet with my friends. I get home at about nine o’clock and I have dinner. Then I do my English homework or drawing some drawing or watch cinema a film. I go to bed at eleven thirty. I sleep for seven hours.

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That was a really well written text, well done! There was only a few problems with articles and verbs, but nothing too serious.

- When we talk about meals, we NEVER say "a breakfast" , "a lunch" etc. They are never used with articles, we simply say to have breakfast, to make breakfast, to eat breakfast etc.

- When explaining a period of time, we can say from 9 o'clock to/until 12 o'clock. From and to (or until) can be used to express this. What you said in the text does make sense but it's better to use this format.

- I corrected "I do drawing" to "I do some drawing" because the first sentence does not make sense. You can say "I draw"  but not "I do drawing.". After that, I changed "watch cinema" to "watch a film".

We can use "I go to the cinema" , "I watch a film" but you cannot watch a cinema because the cinema is where you watch a film! 

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I hope these corrections were useful, good luck with your studies!

cloning ¿good or bad? - Cloning - Good or bad?

To begin with, I strongly oppose to the idea of cloning living animals or people. It is true that it could be a great asset and an advantage for further scientific investigation. Cloning animals would be an amazing help in the genetic field. Scientists might be finally able to recreate the image of the great ancient animal species. Parents would be able to replace their deceased children with genetical genetically modified 'biological' robots provided with interconstructed memories and thoughts, and gifted with artificial intelligence. Also, cloning human organs would diminish the waiting lists for organ transplants and other surgical interventions. Therefore, doctors would be able to cure more people at a faster rate.
However, when I read about the true scope of this practice, it reminded me of the intellectual and philososphical movement named transhumanism, wichwhich defends the idea that we, people, should use the advanced technology within our reach with the aim of improving improving ourselves and both our mental and phisicalphysical capacities.
In my view, Transhumanism and cloning have more similar goals than one might think. In the first place, along with all the positive contributions, cloning would look forward not only to create a good and fucntionalfunctional specimen, but a perfect one. However, the more they try to make something flawless, the less natural it becomes. As a consequence, our dreams are not limited to create a good matter, but to make feasible the idea of superpowers and other sci-fi things that shall make us, humans, a more superior race. I see it as something unfair nonetheless, as only the people of high prestige of our society will get the chance to have implanted in them and in their children the desired traits (intelligence, strength, atractiveness), but the lower social classes will not have the same opportunity. This will create a large social gap in our society that had been erased many decades ago, since the UDHR in 1948.
To be clear, I am not against saving people and animal species, but I do object the idea of the wrong person getting their hands on this well-aimed project, and ending up turnigturning it into something unpleasentunpleasant.


Thank you very much for correnting this text and I hope you've enjoyed your reading! You'refree to leave a comment. I'd like to know other people's opinion about this topic.

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Hey there! That was an incredibly interesting, well written essay! I must admit, I definitely agree with you. Cloning provides science with wonderful opportunities but it most only be used to an extent to prevent it being abused. Specifically with increasing the gap between the rich and the poor, with the rich having access to such things and the poor do not, as you stated! 

I just corrected a few spelling errors for you, which were nothing serious given the really good quality of your writing!