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My typical day.
I wake up early at six thirty. I get up and I have a shower. I make the breakfast at ten to seven and I have breakfast. I do exercise at twenty past seven and I get dressed. I go to work at eight o’clock. I start to work at nine o’clock. I have a dinner at one o’clock to two o’clock. I finish to work at six o’clock then I meet with my friends. I get home about nine o’clock and I have dinner. Then I do my English homework or drawing or watch cinema. I go to bed at eleven thirty. I sleep for seven hours.
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My typical day.I wake up early at six thirty. I get up and I have a shower. I make the breakfast at ten to seven and I have breakfast. I do exercise at twenty past seven and I get dressed. I go to work at eight o’clock. I start to work at nine o’clock. I have a dinner at one o’clock to two o’clock from one o'clock to two o'clock. I finish to work at six o’clock then I meet with my friends. I get home at about nine o’clock and I have dinner. Then I do my English homework or drawing some drawing or watch cinema a film. I go to bed at eleven thirty. I sleep for seven hours.
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That was a really well written text, well done! There was only a few problems with articles and verbs, but nothing too serious.
- When we talk about meals, we NEVER say "a breakfast" , "a lunch" etc. They are never used with articles, we simply say to have breakfast, to make breakfast, to eat breakfast etc.
- When explaining a period of time, we can say from 9 o'clock to/until 12 o'clock. From and to (or until) can be used to express this. What you said in the text does make sense but it's better to use this format.
- I corrected "I do drawing" to "I do some drawing" because the first sentence does not make sense. You can say "I draw" but not "I do drawing.". After that, I changed "watch cinema" to "watch a film".
We can use "I go to the cinema" , "I watch a film" but you cannot watch a cinema because the cinema is where you watch a film!
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I hope these corrections were useful, good luck with your studies!
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My typical day.I wake up early at six thirty. I get up and I have a shower. I make the breakfast at ten to seven and eat it. I do exercise at twenty past seven and then dress. I go to work at eight o’clock and start at nine. I have dinner at one o’clock to two. I finish work at six then I meet my friends. I come home about nine and I have dinner. Then I do my English homework or draw or watch a film. I go to bed at eleven thirty and sleep for seven hours.
Very well written!
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