My favorite film<Inception>
My favorite movie is a science fiction film “Inception”.This film was directed and wrote by Christopher Nolan .
The film was talked about a thief played by Leonardo DiCaprio , who steals corporate secrets through use of dream-sharing technology, is given the inverse task of planting an idea into the mind of a CEO.
I saw this movie with my intimate friend in the cinema .I did not clearly understand some plots when I was watching. And I had many doubts about the plots.Even so, I was still shock about this story ,changing my logic.
We always make dream where we can mistake for a real world in diary life.It’s really interest ,when you are asleep, you create an entire world.I've seen the movie more than 2-3 times .The story is excellent, the plot, acting dialogues and all other aspects of the movie are superb. The movie deeply shocked me and it is my favourite movie I have ever seen.
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My favorite film
The film was talked is about a thief played by Leonardo DiCaprio, who steals corporate secrets through the use of dream-sharing technology. He is given the inverse task of planting an idea into the mind of a CEO.
I saw this movie with my intimate close friend in at the cinema .I did not clearly fully understand some plots some of the plot when I was watching it. And I had many doubts about the plots the story. Even so, I was still shock about this story the story shocked/surprised me. changing my logic.
We always make dream where we can mistake for a real world in diary life. When we have a very vivid dream, we can mistake it for the real world. It’s really interesting ,when you are asleep, you can create an entirely new world. I've seen the movie more than 2-3 many times/over 3 times .The story is excellent, the plot, acting dialogues and all other aspects of the movie are superb. The movie deeply shocked me and it is my favourite movie I have ever seen. my favourite movie. /the best movie I have ever seen.
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Hi there! I hope these corrections help you out a little bit, I spent a bit of time on them. You have a really good command of English, there was just a few tense problems and vocabulary issues.
One thing I want to really point out is that intimate friend is not used in English, we say close friend or dear friend. Intimate is generally used regarding other things.
Apart from that, I wish you all the best for your English studies!
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