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- it is a great news that you are eventually coming to shanghai . I am working in some projects at the moment. however i will have finished by friday . now so why do not come then?, only it is going to take a hour hour to get here from hangzhou, i need also to get out and about. i am really exhausted and tired of these offices , lets hit this amazing city ón your visit, this city got a amazing chill out and clubbing areas. Restaurants are really pricy, although here there is a countless place where you can try tasty dishes. Any way , shanghai is friendly , cosmopolitan city, with really vibrant feel to it. In the last few years, there have been a lot of changes, it used to be a but abandoned places, but all been done up , and now it is a tourist hot-pot , there are some very trendy areas , a huge green zone and a enormus Malls, if you are into that kind of thing. Check your use of articles, plurals and prepositions. Try using Grammary.com for grammar error correction and ChatGPT to suggest synonyms and improve the style. The hemmingway app is also useful.0 votedDecember 12, 20231
Hi everyone,<o:p></o:p>
I am trying to improve my English day by day. Can you please help me edit this first notebook entry?
My name is Nancy, I am 23 years old, my hobbies are quite simple, I love reading books, traveling and sometimes shopping with my friend. I graduated in tourism management from National Economic University. I have never worked for a tourism company before but I have some experience working in a hotel. Working as a hotel receptionist I had a chance to communicate with customers from overseas. As you know, I studied tourism so I have knowledge of tours, travel places, hotel, and services. I had an interview for a sales position yesterday. They asked me to write a passage about my thoughts on tourism and what I will do to improve my work in the future.
And can someone recommend other things to include in my passage?
Thank you so much!
Try expanding in the “and so on” part of your knowledge you gained at university. Also include more on your duties as a hotel receptionist. Did you arrange tours, transport, guest pick up, airport drop off etc. Move the hobbies to the end of the passage. I hope this helps,
Kind regards,
Andy<o:p></o:p>
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Hi. I went to my grandmother´s house. I greeted her with a hug and a kiss in her cheek.
I went with my mother to my grandmother´s house. When my mother and I leave the building for to go to my grandmother´s house, the rain begin. Then we return to search the umbrella. The rain start to fall more. The wind blew so hard that I arrived to the building where my grandmother lives with the shoes soaked in water. I ate a steak with rice and as desert a little créme caramel. I can´t drank the glass of mango juice becasuse I was full. I gave to my mother my glass. I had to take off my shoes because it was wetted.
My socks too were wetted.try this:
Hi. I went to my grandmother´s house and I greeted her with a hug and a kiss on her cheek.
I went there with my mother.<o:p></o:p>When my mother and I left the building to go to my grandmother´s house, it began to rain. We returned to search for the umbrella. The rain started to fall more (or… it started to rain harder).<o:p></o:p>
The wind blew so hard that I got to my grandmother’s house with my shoes soaked in water. I ate a steak with rice and as desert had a little créme caramel. I couldn’t drink the glass of mango juice because I was full so I gave it to my mother. <o:p></o:p>
I had to take off my shoes and socks because they were wet.<o:p></o:p>
0 votedJuly 3, 20170- Hi there, It refers to the use of water cannon in controlling protestors. Water cannon is just a big fire hose that soaks people with cold water. It is mounted normally on top of a riot control vehicle. It is a non-lethal form of crowd control. Youtube search "water cannon" Hope this helps. Kind regards Andy0 votedJuly 3, 20171
