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Hi. I went to my grandmother´s house. I greeted her with a hug and a kiss in her cheek.
I went with my mother to my grandmother´s house. When my mother and I leave the building for to go to my grandmother´s house, the rain begin. Then we return to search the umbrella. The rain start to fall more. The wind blew so hard that I arrived to the building where my grandmother lives with the shoes soaked in water. I ate a steak with rice and as desert a little créme caramel. I can´t drank the glass of mango juice becasuse I was full. I gave to my mother my glass. I had to take off my shoes because it was wetted.
My socks too were wetted.
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Today
Hi. I went to my grandmother´s house. I greeted her with a hug and a kiss on in her cheek.I went with my mother to my grandmother´s house. When my mother and I leave left the building for to go to my grandmother´s house, the rain begin (this is correct but I'd say: it started to rain).Then So we returned to look for umbrellas. The rain got heavier start to fall more. The wind blew so hard that when I arrived at the building where my grandmother lives with the my shoes were soaked in with water. I ate a steak with rice and as desert a little créme caramel. I couldn't can´t drank the glass of mango juice because I was full. I gave to my mother my glass. I had to take off my shoes because they were wet. it was wetted. My socks were wet too. too were wetted.
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Today
Hi. I went to my grandmother´s house. I greeted her with a hug and a kiss in her cheek.I went with my mother to my grandmother´s house. When my mother and I leave the building for to go to my grandmother´s house, the rain begin. Then we return to search the umbrella. The rain start to fall more. The wind blew so hard that I arrived to the building where my grandmother lives with the shoes soaked in water. I ate a steak with rice and as desert a little créme caramel. I can´t drank the glass of mango juice becasuse I was full. I gave to my mother my glass. I had to take off my shoes because it was wetted.
My socks too were wetted.
try this:
Hi. I went to my
grandmother´s house and I greeted her with a hug and a kiss on her cheek.
I went there with my mother.
When my mother and I
left the building to go to my grandmother´s house, it began to rain. We returned
to search for the umbrella. The rain started to fall more (or… it started to
rain harder).
The wind blew so hard
that I got to my grandmother’s house with my shoes soaked in water. I ate a
steak with rice and as desert had a little créme caramel. I couldn’t drink the
glass of mango juice because I was full so I gave it to my mother.
I had to take off my
shoes and socks because they were wet.
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