- Nice job! I wasn't sure how to read the second to last sentence. Are you saying that a couple should consider renting a flat, but that they should not spend too much money on it? Or just that they should not spend too much money on it?

Renting a flat - essay - part 1

If someone doesn’t want to live with his/her parents or buy a house/ a flat then they can rent a flat or house.
Renting a flat/ a house has advantages and disadvantages. If someone moves into a renting flat then they have to pay at least a one monthly but this may also or two monthly deposit.

In many cases renting a flat is temporary solution. Nowadays it is becoming more common that youngsters young people choose renting a flat instead of a student hostel (dorm?)
In case if for example a couple would like to go to live with each other together then it is worth considering that since the flat is not theirs so It is not worthwhile to spend too many money on it.
So it is not worth it to buy such furniture that they cannot to take with themselves if they want to move to another flat or house.

- Haha, I've seen this film too! 

Can you say what movie is that this is?

Once upon a different time, and a different place (the phrase "once upon a time" is an idiom, and inserting "different" into it sounds a bit funny - not wrong, but just a little strange), a large young group of young people showed up at that a bright club's bright entrance. A fast rhythm could be heard from the inside. On the stage, spotlights was were lighted lit as the musicians started to play: first, the drummer, then the keyboard player, then the guitarist, until the beautiful female singer came running to the center of they them all. The crowd was so mesmerized by the tune that nobody noticed when a leather jacketed bikers' gang entered the hall. By the last chords the bikers started a mess scene (or a "ruckus"), beating the players on the stage and taking the singer with them.
(End of first scene)

- This sounds like fun! "Your majesty Wilhelm" - LOL

22.11.2016

Today we had a History of International Relations competition concerning the First World War. We were split into two teams - the Entente and the Triple Alliance. I was the leader of the second team so I asked my teammates to call me "Your Majesty Wilhelm". We were supposed to ask each other different kinds of questions about the war. The only condition was to ask questions that required discussing or analysing. discussion or analysis.
Before the beginning of the competition, we decided to exchange a couple of correct answers because the questions were very challenging. No sooner did our professor enter the auditorium, than the bloody battle began.
Unfortunately, most of my teammates except for a couple of people didn't know the materials on the First World War very well, but this didn't stop us from scoring a huge number of points. We answered almost all the questions correctly and won the competition! I suppose that we somehow "changed" the history - the Triple Alliance beat the Entente while otherwise everything happened otherwise as in reality.
Our professor gave us 10 points according to our university system of students' knowledge evaluation. Our opponents were given just three points. In my opinion, our professor's decision was unfair because some of them knew pretty much the subject pretty well and deserved to get extra points.

- Looks good! Don't forget to put a space after punctuation marks (. , !) and capitalize "I".

Diary

Today i I read a book named called (or "titled") Robinson Crusoe, which is a adventureful story. When i I was a boy, adventure was my favorite. i I read a book (If you mean you read books as a boy, you may want to say "many books"; if you're talking about now, you should specify that), in that time. i was drew drawn by to (or "attracted to")  all kinds of things in the story. i I thought everything was interesting. I was too excited to sleep for a few hours.I have to say that Robinson Crusoe is full of wisdom (wisdom is something philosophical - "knowledge" might be a better choice for practical things like making bread).He can do almost anything, such as making pots, making bread from corn, even making building a home.He was so courageous that invigorated it gave him the strength to survive more than 27 years, and had to endure loneliness. In addition, he also saved Friday.They got help ,due to through a rescue by the captain. i I love the ocean, i  I will want to sail one day.

- Looks good! There were a few words/phrases that were not wrong, but maybe not the most fluent chice, which I've noted below. Hope you stick with it!

My learning experience

I started learning English in the beginning of this year and I have fortunatelly (fortunately implies something you don't have control over - not technically incorrect, but "faithfully" might be a better choice) stayed with it  (not incorrect, but I would say "stuck with it") until now. That means that I've been learning for ten and half months. After that amount of time of listening and reading for every day I'm now starting to fell feel a need for speaking and writing., which is the reason I'm now here. I'd like to write anything something every each day, at least three or four sentences. I hope that I will keep it up at least until the end of the year. What am I going to write about? I actually don't know but it'll be probably be about my learning ("studies"?), as now like this, or about something I'm interested in.
So I hope that I have not written made many mistakes and look forward to correction.

Bye from Prague, Karel

18.11.2016

Today I woke up at 6 a.m. I studied Romanian a bit, ate a sandwich and went to the tram stop. Having got on the tram, I began to listen to my favourite music that helped me to calm down before a Law test I was supposed to have. When I was almost at got to the university my friends sent me a message saying that our Law professor had got ill come down with something so we wouldn't have the test. I was so happy and irritated at the same time. Yes, I like Law seminars very much and I always try to contribute to discussions on different problems but our professor might have sent the message earlier! Therefore I would I could have had an extra hour of sleep.
Anyway, this situation couldn't be changed and I had to wait till my psychology lecture had started. I spendt two hours talking to my classmate. To tell the truth, she is a real chatterbox who dominates all conversations. She adores talking very much and very fast so you just can't get a word in edgewayswise with her around. Even though sometimes I want to tell her "Put a sock in it! Zip it! Pipe down!" she's pretty kind and open-minded. My classmate stopped talking my ears off only when our psychology lecture began.
It went pretty well and I learned many things that I hadn't known before. For example, do you know that our thoughts can determine our actions? The thing is that everything we imagine is directly connected with our subconsciousness which set causes us to do certain things depending on what we imagine. There is no doubt that we try to imagine every situation that is going to happen to us such as talking to the boss, buying goods and so on. That's why when we think that the situation will turn out to be bad (or good) it always happens so that way.
After my lectures, I spent some time with my Colombian friends talking to them in both Spanish and English. I finally realised that it isn't too much trouble to talk in a foreign language even if you make mistakes. Native speakers aren't going to beat your head off.
Then I had an extra Physical Education lesson. The thing is that a month ago I skipped a lesson because I had to get a medical certificate. I suppose you to think that there is nothing to be worried about. However, our coach told us that we wouldn't get good marks if we skipped even one lesson. That's why I came to him today in order to do some exercises.

- Nice essay! When you're talking about historical figures, you don't need to use the "Mr." - you can just say "Douglas" or "Wilde."

A glimpse of O. Wilde

Oscar Wilde was an Irish playwright, novelist, essayist, and poet.
As a spokesman for aestheticism, he tried his hand at various literary activities: he published a book of poems, lectured in the United States and Canada on the new "English Renaissance in Art", and worked as a journalist.
I would like to tell you about his imprisonment, because it’s an unusual case in writers’ lives literary history.   
Mr Wilde went to prison because of the his relationship with Alfred Douglas, a British poet and translator. The father of this men man (or "Douglas's father") had injured slandered the mr Wilde, calling him a buggerer, and began legal process. In those days sodomy was still forbidden. Mr Wilde defended a case very tellingly articulately? and ardently and tried to assure the judge their love was platonic. But despite in spite of these words he was jailed behind bars (or "put behind bars") for 2 years.
The prison broke his spirit, what‘s more; worse, his beloved Douglas never made a visited to him.
And he died in exile in France, there was nobody with him. His death was very painful.
On his grave was a stone Sphinx which stated was engraved with, in honour of his story, «The Sphinx without a secret». After awhile this tombstone was spread covered with kisses and they have decided to fence it off, to protect against the lipstick marks.

Letter of recommendation

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you as a member of Amnesty International to recommend a Spanish volunteer who is very interested in taking part in the Amnesty International Programme in your country.

As a social worker, Tatiana, has many years of experience as a social worker. She had has worked in several different social areas: health;, work with the disabled people, social exclusion and social services. Now she is working as coordinator and social worker in the Local Council of her city.

Regarding her international experience, Tatiana, worked in London as a waitress for more than one over a year. Her English level is B1, so she can express herself and to deal in a general way with nonroutine information.

She is interested in participating in your program in order to know learn how Amnesty International is organized and managed as well as know become familiar with the legal regulation in laws of your country.

Best regards