Diary Today i read a book named Robinson Cruso,which is a adventureful story.when i was a boy,adventure was my favorite.i read a book,in that time.i was drew by all kinds of things in the story.i thou

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Diary Today i read a book named Robinson Cruso,which is a adventureful story.when i was a boy,adventure was my favorite.i read a book,in that time.i was drew by all kinds of things in the story.i thought everything was interesting.I was too excited to sleep few hours.I have to say Robinson is full of wisdom.He can do almost anything，such as making pots,making bread from corn,even making a home.He was so courageous that invigorated him to survive more than 27 years.And had to endure loneliness.In addition,he also saved Friday.They got help ,due to rescue the captain.i love ocean,i will sail one day.

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Diary

Today i I read a book named called (or "titled") Robinson Crusoe, which is a adventureful story. When i I was a boy, adventure was my favorite. i I read a book (If you mean you read books as a boy, you may want to say "many books"; if you're talking about now, you should specify that), in that time. i was drew drawn by to (or "attracted to") all kinds of things in the story. i I thought everything was interesting. I was too excited to sleep for a few hours.I have to say that Robinson Crusoe is full of wisdom (wisdom is something philosophical - "knowledge" might be a better choice for practical things like making bread).He can do almost anything, such as making pots, making bread from corn, even making building a home.He was so courageous that invigorated it gave him the strength to survive more than 27 years, and had to endure loneliness. In addition, he also saved Friday.They got help ,due to through a rescue by the captain. i I love the ocean, i I will want to sail one day.

Diary

Today I read a book named Robinson Crusoe , which is a adventureful story. When I was a boy, adventure was my favorite. I read a book, in that time, I was drew by all kinds of things in the story. I thought everything was interesting. I was too excited to sleep even for a few hours. I have to say Robinson is full of wisdom. He can do almost anything, such as making pots, making bread from corn, even making a home. He was so courageous and that invigorated him to survive more than 27 years and to endure loneliness. In addition, he also saved Friday. They got help, with a rescue by the captain. I love the ocean. I will sail one day.

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