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Can you say what movie is that? Once upon a different time, and a different place, a large young group showed up at that bright club's entrance. A fast rhythm could be heard from the inside. On the stage, spotlights was lighted as the musicians started to play: first, the drummer, then the keyboard player, the guitarist, until the beautiful female singer came running to the center of they all. The crowd was so mesmerized by the tune that nobody noticed when a leather jacket bikers' gang entered the hall. By the last chords the bikers started a mess, beating the players on the stage and taking the singer with them. (End of first scene)

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Can you say what movie is that?

Once upon a different time, and a different place, a large young group showed up at that bright club's entrance. A fast rhythm could be heard from the inside. On the stage, spotlights was lighted as the musicians started to play: first, the drummer, then the keyboard player, the guitarist, until the beautiful female singer came running to the center of they all. The crowd was so mesmerized by the tune that nobody noticed when a leather jacket bikers' gang entered the hall. By the last chords the bikers started a mess, beating the players on the stage and taking the singer with them.
(End of first scene)

Do you know what movie this is?

Once upon a different time and place, a large group of young people arrived at the bright club's entrance.  A fast rhythm could be heard from inside the club.  On the stage, the spotlight illuminated each band member in turn, starting with the drummer, then the keyboard player, then the guitarist, and finally a beautiful female singer who came running onto the center of the stage. The crowd was so mesmerized by the song that no one noticed when a leather-jacket biker gang entered the club. By the time that the last chords had been played, the bikers had started a fight, beat all of the band members, and had taken the singer with them.

(End of the first scene)

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- Haha, I've seen this film too! 

Can you say what movie is that this is?

Once upon a different time, and a different place (the phrase "once upon a time" is an idiom, and inserting "different" into it sounds a bit funny - not wrong, but just a little strange), a large young group of young people showed up at that a bright club's bright entrance. A fast rhythm could be heard from the inside. On the stage, spotlights was were lighted lit as the musicians started to play: first, the drummer, then the keyboard player, then the guitarist, until the beautiful female singer came running to the center of they them all. The crowd was so mesmerized by the tune that nobody noticed when a leather jacketed bikers' gang entered the hall. By the last chords the bikers started a mess scene (or a "ruckus"), beating the players on the stage and taking the singer with them.
(End of first scene)
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Well done, Michael!
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