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Hello everyone! My name is Rúben, I am a 24 year old Portuguese. I have been studying English since I was a small child and I have several family members living in English speaking countries with whom I lived and learnt. My English level is currently native, with an American accent. My Spanish is slightly weaker and I will work on in later when time allows it. I wish to learn Japanese and Korean. These are two cultures I have visited and fallen in love with. Currently I am focusing more on Japanese. My hobbies include drawing, going to the movies, music, videogames, boxing, outings with friends and swimming. I am always up for a chat so if you require help with English or Portuguese I can lend you a hand. Just say hi and we can become friends.
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    TOEFL a writing section

    Hi, I will take a TOEFL next weekend.
    Today I practiced a writing section.
    If someone can correct my grammar, that would be nice.
    Thank you for this in advance.

    This is the topic: 
    032: Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

    These are my ideas.
    1 You only live once, you should do so without regrets.

    2 Money is meaningless.

    3 I believe we should spend money to experience different cultures. 

    This is my answer.
    Some people say that we should save money for the future, because when we become adults and have kids, we really need money.
    Others** think that people should enjoy with their money when they earn it.
    If asked you asked them, both side would provide logical reasons to support their stance.
    I support the idea of enjoying our money when we earn it for some reasons.
    Let me explain what I mean; 

    First of all, you only get to live once. 
    I think this mentality is the most important thing for us. For example, when my mom was single, she worked a lot and saved money, so she didn’t much enjoy her youth much , she said she became too much focused on her future and onsaving money. Now she says: "If I could go back to when I was younger, I would like to go travelling a lot and see many cultures".

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    September 24, 2018
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    Secondly, money is meaningless when I die.
    Even if I managed to save lots of money, it would just be the same as paper once I passed on.
    In my opinion, people should enjoy life and have as many experiences as much as they can.
    We can’t buy memories or experiences with <wbr>money.

    Thirdly, when we go on a trip, we learn many things.
    I started travelling around the world when I was 18 years old.
    I work and earn money, then I spend that money on trips rather than saving it.  
    But I have never regretted it because I met many people who were very nice to me, also I saw many different cultures. I have learned many things as well***. 

    In conclusion, for the above reasons, I think enjoying my money is better than saving it for the future.


    ** (I removed "people here because it is best not to repeat the same word. It is not incorrect per se, but a wider vocabulary sounds more pleasant)


    *** (I replaced "also" with "as well" so there is not as many repeating words again)


    Hello Momoko. I had to place 2 corrections instead of one since iTalki didn't allow me to post it all in one go. I hope my correction accurately describes what you wished to express and ends up helping you with your TOEFL. I wish you a wonderful day and hope you continue improving your English. Don't give up! 


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    September 24, 2018
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    Atmospheric Pressure

    Today I feel like the atmospheric pressure is very low, due to the typhoon that is approaching. Every time a typhoon is around me, I feel a light headache and dull. Some experts say that atmospheric pressure doesn't cause any difference in one's physical condition, but I don't think so.


    Hello Yasu! I hope my correction accurately describes what you wished to express and ends up helping you. I wish you a wonderful day and hope you continue improving your English. Don't give up! 




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    September 21, 2018
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    November 11, 2016
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    Vida em Moçambique

    Eu gosto de estar aqui em Moçambique.
    Porque todos os moçambicanos são muito gentis e alegres. Agora trabalho com alguns técnicos de agriculturas e eles também apoiam sempre o meu trabalho.
    Além disso, acho que moçambicanos e japoneses têm algumas semelhanças em termos de cultura. Por exemplo, ambos são tímidos e as pessoas tendem a não expressar as suas emoções e pensamentos directamente.

    Segundo, quando fico aqui, o tempo passa muito lentamente. Eu não tenho de ter pressa quando estou em Moçambique.


    Muito bem! Existem alguns erros que podem ser corrigidos com estudo, mas conseguiste transmitir bem os teus pensamentos. Caso tenhas dúvidas ou questões podes perguntar-me.

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    November 9, 2016
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    A good suggestion I have is watching cartoons in English. Tune in to a channel like Cartoon Network, or search for children shows online. Usually people will speak slowly and more clearly so the younger audience can keep up. This way you are listening to quality English spoken by native people and it should be easier to keep up with. Other than that, movies, TV shows and even news videos on YouTube could help.

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    November 9, 2016
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    November 9, 2016
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    Aquarium VS Zoo

    For some reason my family prefers to visit aquariums over zoos. I guess it’s because we could see the movement(*) in the water tanks. Sea otters move quite fast and so do penguins. It’s fun to watch them swim. Sharks move openly. Do lions run fast in zoos? Do cheetahs move like we see on TVs? I don’t think so. They’re almost always sleeping during the day. That’s not very impressive.

    (*) - This is not incorrect, however it would feel more natural if you said it like this: "... fish swimming" or "... animals swim freely". Just "movement" might cause some people to misinterpret what you meant since you are not being specific as to what it is you like to see move.


    Great use of English! Good job. If you have any doubts or questions feel free to ask me.

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    November 9, 2016
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