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I'm Hades . I am from Changchun city Jilin province China , but I live in Beijing now . Software engineer is my job . concerning hobbies: I like to play the guitar , swim , listen to music and travel . I am glad to learn English. if you'd like to learn Chinese , I will be glad to teach and help you. So may I make friend with you ? Come on .......
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    今天有一个盒子送给到我的家里。原来是母亲送给(我)的生日礼物。最近工作太忙,使我也忘记了自己的生日。(回)想起来,很久没回家看望父母了。生活的压力让人很快忘了家庭情感的重要性。停下来,回家吃饭,这是不是最幸福啊。 


    谢谢。
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    May 15, 2017
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    '一次读很少的书' means ‘don't read many books at one time' or 'not much at one time' Don't urge yourself to read too much or too fast , suggest you finish a book that needs some patience and to be continuous till end .
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    December 2, 2016
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    明天美国选择总统

    今天是11月7号星期一,明天是11月8号星期二。在美国我们每四年选择一次总统。11月第一个星期二是选举的一天。我已经用信邮投票了。这样我不会浪费我的时间排队。在美国我们有两个党,民主党,共和党。我登记的是民主党。我的投票是秘密的,但是我觉得你可以猜猜我选择谁。希望川普输了,因为如果他赢了的话我不知道将来会怎么样。也许末日,世界大战,核战争,等等。好的,谢谢你的耐心。很难说的政治,我必须查很多词典,而且我们很少说的政治因为很容易破坏我们之间的情谊,这是一个很伤感情的事情(话题topic )。明天晚上我打算看新闻。希望我选的人会赢。

    "我的人选” is different to "我选的人”!

    The first one means that the people is belong with you , , his social status is more below than yours or you are his boss !

    The second one means that someone or candidate is selected by you ! 

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    November 8, 2016
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    I think you can replace "针对" with "对" in this sentence. But why do you replace this word ? "很多科学家都针对人体发光的现象进行了研究。" is ok . it can express what you want to say . And you replace "针对" with "向" is not ok in Chinese .
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    November 4, 2016
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    我想一个上网笔记本儿

    最近,我不喜欢我的笔记本儿。我觉得它太大了。现在,我想要一个更轻的。所以我想买一个上网笔记本儿。我听说上网笔记本儿特别轻。不过,我觉得轻的没有重的质量好。大家觉得怎么样?笔记本儿比上网笔记本儿好吗?


    功能方面是一样的,但是性能方面上会有差距.

    Functional aspects are the same , but there is a gap in performance.

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    November 3, 2016
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    爬虫也想穿(打扮)得很时髦!

    我的好朋友告诉我他计划开(一家)卖乌龟衣服的商店。我觉得(他的想法不靠谱I think this sentense is better and looks like a Chinese ),所以我告诉他说 ”我已经六十八岁了,但我还没见过穿衣服的乌龟。” 他的回答是 ”那就是我为什么要开一家商店的原因嘛!”
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    November 3, 2016
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    我找到了新工作!

    昨天我去了就业工作。让我吃惊的是,面试刚结束,面试官就给我提供了职位!我要在当地餐馆和酒吧做酒吧女侍。我每周得上班五天,一共工作三十小时。我在那儿工作一段时间后,可以做服务员。当服务员后,如果我努力地工作,有可能得到更多的提拔。

    为这个公司工作我很开心,因为他们被认为在英国全国25强公司之一, 因对员工非常好而获得无数的奖赏,还有获得了许多其他的奖赏。公司提供出色的培训计划,而且重视和尊敬他们所有的员工。

    我不知道我什么时候开始工作,但是经理跟我说开始不会晚于下周。真的希望我能在这份工作里取得成功。
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    November 2, 2016
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    My English teacher I have been learning English ever since college . But because of my work was too busy to study English . Now I have enough time to learn English and have a good English teacher whose name is Carol. Carol is a beautiful Chinese girl and she can speak English fluently. I knew her for four months ago in this year . I remember that my English is too bad to understand an easy sentence . Actually my English is so bad until now . But she distributed some homework and her experiences about learning English to help me to study English in her free time everyday . I know she taught me to study English is very hard and she is busy everyday . Because I had more and more question about English to ask her. But she never show that her was tired or taught hard with me. So I feel grateful her about doing those things for me. Thank you - Carol ......
    November 2, 2016
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    企鹅的后悔

    当我听说过企鹅不用做功课,我就决定变成企鹅。但是现在我很后悔。南极太冷了!再说,企鹅的生活方式太无聊,我们只找鱼,吃鱼,消化鱼,什么的。虽然鱼真的很好吃,但是我吃腻了。我想吃意大利面....

    后悔的企鹅

    当我听说过企鹅不用做功课,我就决定变成企鹅。但是现在我很后悔。南极太冷了!还有/而且/并且,企鹅的生活方式太无聊了,我们只找鱼,吃鱼,消化鱼,什么的。虽然鱼真的很好吃,但是我吃腻了。我想吃意大利面....


    I think those words are better than yours  . And it's a Chinese style . But your Chinese is very good !  You should have some improvement at place of detail . Good luck ; [emoji][emoji] 

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    November 2, 2016
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    You can ask : 1:"你(Nǐ)来(lái)自(zì)哪(nǎ)个(gè)国(guó)家(jiā)?" or 2: "你(nǐ)是(shì)什(shén)么(mē)国(guó)籍(jí)?" . 3:"你(nǐ)来(lái)自(zì)哪(nǎ)里(lǐ)?" You can answer: 1:"我来自美(meǐ)国" 2:"我的(dè)国籍是美国" 3:"我来自美国 or 我是美国人(rén)" country == 国家 where == 哪里 nationality == 国籍
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    November 2, 2016
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