What I Thought of Today

I have always heard that your favorite color and your personality are strongly connected, but I wonder if this is true. If it is, I can use this information on those I am meeting for the first time.

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You can capitalize most words in a title, except things like of.

Here you can use the past perfect in your first sentence

Just a question, do you believe this to be true? 

If you have doubts and want to express disbelief then the correction would have been like this.

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What I Thought of Today

I have always heard that your favorite color and your personality are strongly connected, but I wonder if this is true. If it was, I could have used this information on those I was meeting for the first time.

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Please let me know your thoughts,

Manuel.

My Introduction

Hi, I'm Joselu, I'm 21 years old and I'm from Valencia (Spain).   I work as a waiter in a restaurant. Right now, I'm studying for an exam.

 I am looking for someone who could help me practice using English.

Thank you for your attention.

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Don't forget to capitalize proper nouns such as Valencia, Spain and your own name.

You can also capitalize most words in a title, example My Introduction

I switched the order of your descriptions because they flow better this way.

Please let me know if you agree with the corrections

- Manuel

Hello again.

I have returned to italki to continue my English learning.

This year has been hard, because of all that I had to learn. I have been looking for a job and I hope I can find one soon.

I am happy because I have finally decided to practice my writing and my speaking skills. It took me months to practice and to confront my shame and distrust.

Now, I am practicing and increasing my vocabulary so that I can have better conversations in English and to become more fluent in using the language.

Today I will be writing for practice and not only for vocabulary as mentioned above since I also want to practice the verb tenses.

I would be grateful for your corrections and suggestions.

Greetings from México to the entire community of italki.

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I changed will to would as a matter of politeness, will implies people will do it and correct you. Would is softer which is what I think you wanted to transmit.

Don't forget to capitalize the E in English because it is a proper noun

This is how I would correct it, I hope I got the meaning across correctly.  Please let me know what you think? Well done keep on practicing.

The Stranger. Part 2. P

Damien goes on to stay on The Druid's Island in a parallel world.

I curiously listened to Lisa. Sure I had tried asking questions but there were still many things that I couldn't understand.

"I understood (how) all of this began. But what about the nightmares? How did I get to them?

"Someone made it so that I couldn't find you. You vanished from your world at the same time as I came here. Do you think it's just a coincidence? I don't think so."

"What was this place we came to? There have been so many strange things and events. Did the testers check for bugs?" I tried to joke.

"I don't know. Let's stop thinking about it. We have other problems to solve." Lisa answered

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This is very hard to correct because I have doubts about the meaning of some of these sentences and I am not up to date with the story but I tried to help you out. Comment if you need further assistance.

Different way to use polite expressions

Polite expressions are used to show respect but did you know there are different ways of using them?

Example 1
Imagine a married couple that usually uses casual expressions with one another. One day, the wife suddenly starts using polite expressions to her husband. This is not because she wants to show respect, but to show that she is angry at him or that there is an emotional gap between them.

Example 2
Mr. A and Mr. B are classmates or co-workers, they are of the same age or are in similar positions. They know it's more natural to use casual expressions but for some reason, Mr.A uses polite expressions to Mr.B. This shows Mr. A doesn't want to be friends with Mr. B.

As we can see with these examples, polite expressions can sometimes be used when you don't want to show intimacy or closeness with a person.

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Corrected some things hope it helps. Thanks by the way. I had no idea polite expressions could be used in this way. 

For all English speakers.

Hello everyone,  lpractice and learn spanish, I am available for language exchange. I can help you to improve your Spanish and you can help me to improve my English.

Let's help each other out :D

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I wouldn't mind improving my Spanish. Send me a message if interested 

Regards,

Manuel

Good Afternoon people!

I'd like to point out that I feel my English is really improving every day.

Going to the point, I would like to share the fact that my English is improving each day.

I'm practicing a lot of listening, a little bit of speaking but I almost never get to read or write in English.
Despite mainly training my listening skills I feel my English is really improving every day.

My strategies are: watching several types of videos on youtube, using free online courses, and any other materials I can find.
Thus, my English is improving slowly but consistently.

My vocabulary is getting better even though sometimes I forget many of the words I just learned.
My grammar is good even though I make a few mistakes on occasion.

Sorry for the short text and thanks in advance for the corrections.

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Cut off a few parts of the text that were repetitive, and made it sound more natural what do you think? Well done though. :)

Keep practicing writing,  reading, listening and speaking. All 4 skills are essential and relying only on one is never enough. Keep writing and feel free to contact me if you need help with writing or speaking

Regards,

Manuel 

Host Family Letter, Part 1

Dear host family,

First of all, I would like to thank you for your good will in letting me become part of your family. It has been always my dream to visit Japan, and now thanks to you it became a reality.

I am really looking forward to meeting you.

I would like to begin by introducing myself. My name is Julia and I am 15 years old. I will be turning 16 in March 2017. The idea of studying in Japan came to my mind about 2 years ago when I was 13. Since then I have been interested in Japan.  My family supports my interest in Japanese culture.

I enjoy studying. I can't say that I prefer arts or sciences because I find both interesting although in different ways. Science explains things beyond the human race while arts teaches us about humanity. Math, physics and IT have rules, they are complex and logical. Arts on the other hand, although not as straightforward as science, talk about our everyday lives and help me to understand society and culture.

After graduating I would like to keep on studying at a university. However, I'm not really sure what I want to study or where I want to do it. I really like the idea of studying abroad or taking a year off to travel to developing countries or doing some volunteer work.

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By informatics I am guessing you meant computer stuff right? IT (information technology) is more accurately used in this case if I am not mistaken :)

I changed some grammar, fixed a few lexical mistakes, fixed up the punctuation. Don't forget to add a complimentary close to the final version of your letter (regards, maybe you could even put the really looking forward to meet you part at the end as your closure?)

Please tell me your thoughts on the corrected version

- Manuel