Host Family Letter, Part 1

First of all, I would like to thank you for your good will in letting me become part of your family. It has been always my dream to visit Japan, and now thanks to you it became a reality.

I am really looking forward to meeting you.

I would like to begin by introducing myself. My name is Julia and I am 15 years old. I will be turning 16 in March 2017. The idea of studying in Japan came to my mind about 2 years ago when I was 13. Since then I have been interested in Japan.  My family supports my interest in Japanese culture.

I enjoy studying. I can't say that I prefer arts or sciences because I find both interesting although in different ways. Science explains things beyond the human race while arts teaches us about humanity. Math, physics and IT have rules, they are complex and logical. Arts on the other hand, although not as straightforward as science, talk about our everyday lives and help me to understand society and culture.

After graduating I would like to keep on studying at a university. However, I'm not really sure what I want to study or where I want to do it. I really like the idea of studying abroad or taking a year off to travel to developing countries or doing some volunteer work.

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By informatics I am guessing you meant computer stuff right? IT (information technology) is more accurately used in this case if I am not mistaken :)

I changed some grammar, fixed a few lexical mistakes, fixed up the punctuation. Don't forget to add a complimentary close to the final version of your letter (regards, maybe you could even put the really looking forward to meet you part at the end as your closure?)

Please tell me your thoughts on the corrected version

- Manuel

Host Family Letter, Part 1

Host Family Letter, Part 1