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The Stranger. Part 2. Please, correct my mistakes. Damien goes on to stay on The Druid's Island in a parallel world... I was curious listening to Lisa. Sure I tried to ask questions because there were many things that I couldn't understand. "I understand all this began. What about the nightmares? How did I get there?" "Someone wanted that i couldn't find you. Your wanish from your world happened at the same moment when I came there. Do you thing it's just coincidence? I don't think so." "What was the place I came?There were many strange things and events. Did testers check bugs?" I tried to joke. "I don't know. Let's stop to think about it. Now we have more real problems to solve." Lisa answered

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The Stranger. Part 2. P

Damien goes on to stay on The Druid's Island in a parallel world.

I curiously listened to Lisa. Sure I had tried asking questions but there were still many things that I couldn't understand.

"I understood (how) all of this began. But what about the nightmares? How did I get to them?

"Someone made it so that I couldn't find you. You vanished from your world at the same time as I came here. Do you think it's just a coincidence? I don't think so."

"What was this place we came to? There have been so many strange things and events. Did the testers check for bugs?" I tried to joke.

"I don't know. Let's stop thinking about it. We have other problems to solve." Lisa answered

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This is very hard to correct because I have doubts about the meaning of some of these sentences and I am not up to date with the story but I tried to help you out. Comment if you need further assistance.


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