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I am learning English writing. I am here for language/culture exchange purpose.
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Joseph
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Dec 3, 2016
Speak soon, keep up the hard work!
Joseph
English
Dec 3, 2016
Good luck!
Joseph
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Dec 3, 2016
Great writing!
Joseph
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Dec 3, 2016
Great work Cathy!
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  • Corrected
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    October 23, 2022
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    你可以修改我的例句吗? 慕尼黑是德国的一个典型的城市。 明天我会再回中国一趟。 在德国没有小米手机的零件。 苹果手机的零件不匹配小米手机。 讲诉是告诉的意思。 小弄子是小路的一个区的意思。 在一个公司上班的人叫职工。 上海慢慢摒弃中国的特征。 在东北有很多喜剧演员。 谢谢你的帮助!
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    October 23, 2022
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  • Corrected

    我把这本书放置在书架。

    我喜欢轻抚我的狗。
    我还没跳水过。
    我评价过高高估了我的西班牙语的水平。
    你是对的,你说服我。
    我常常拥抱我的女朋友。
    我轻视数学是这么难。?
    我累的时候,我也很困惑。
    去年我加倍我的利润。
    德国得简化它的税款的系统。
    二十七年以前德国联合了。
    我的狗吧把猫赶走。
    有我想避免的人。
    英国抛弃欧洲。
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    March 1, 2017
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  • Corrected

    医生治疗病人。

    模仿政治家很有意思。
    去印度以前我得给我接种疫苗。
    这个话题对我使我感兴趣。
    我方间房间隔离的得很好。
    抓破黑板听得不好。(?)
    美国常常开战。
    去旅行以前,我爸爸转载汽车。?
    很多人没有食品食物,感到痛苦。
    我在床上躺着。
    消防队员扑灭或火。
    看着书看到重要的句子,我标出来。
    从九点开始我疲倦。
    我打工的工作是设计程序。
    革命以前很多人抗议。
    我常常问道花。?
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    February 26, 2017
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  • Corrected

    我得去除这个污点。

    我父母死的时候,我要继承(继承is a Vt. so you have to add a n. after that)。
    我不提醒(vt)你怎么写这个字。
    我不认出认识这个女孩。
    Zohra 激发我学习印地语。
    如果你不能游泳,你就可以会溺死。
    一个朋友钓鱼。
    一个教授组长和她的研究小组。
    我装满我的瓶子。
    我喂养我够(?)。
    这位杀人犯坦白了。
    我女朋友的头发发光。
    我父母祝贺我因为我的成绩很好。
    我没悬挂照片。
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    February 26, 2017
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  • Corrected

    美国和俄国很不友善。

    这个菜是肥的。
    水是液态。
    夏天的时候我很晒黑。
    Gunnar 从来没有来到得精确。
    我在的祖国城市是慕尼黑。
    礼貌的行为很重要。
    这条连衣裙很紧身。
    Cola很人造。
    我的屏幕是无光泽的。
    我妈妈常常说得很表达否定。
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    February 23, 2017
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    这个花园是私立的。

    我总是到得准时。
    这个香蕉是成熟的。
    我不喜欢酸的东西。
    这个房子是脏的。
    印度很美丽。
    意大利是阳光从足充足的。
    太多是过分的。
    我不可以看懂,是不明确的。
    今天天气非常好,是无云的。
    对我女朋友我很温柔。
    玻璃很易碎。
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    February 23, 2017
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    孩子依赖他们的父母。

    我传染我的同学。
    我渴望是百万富翁。
    恳求常常有用。
    我正点燃一个只香烟。
    观众鼓掌得多。
    这个事使我生气。
    我写错了,我得擦掉。
    战争以后,美国解放德国。
    我不想一个人去,你可以伴随我?
    我不想保存旧的书。
    一个灯泡照亮一个房间。
    我不妒忌学医的学生。
    美国新的总统使我发愁。
    我钦佩Bill Gates 。
    我从来没有烫过衬衫。


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    February 23, 2017
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    criticism criticism : As for her photography, her color-sensitive ability also shows in her photos. She took those pictures with analog camera which proves she has fierce eyes and she is a quick catcher. She has her own humor and thoughts into those photos, while as photography, they have some connection problems. I suggest she could focuses on serious project, and notice the arrangement and sequence of pictures. I like her drawing, they show her unconstrained imaginary. Her photos, illustrations and film are in consistent style. She should keep it work, keep drawing. At last, her story Trees I think could be turned into a good script, it has characters, personalities, humorous and inversions. As for the outline concept, Help Me is cute story while she should extend it into a full script. The Good Ideas is a bad name, as the feature length film is nothing really big surprise. Her website is clear and has some designs and poems. I can feel her sensitive emotions in her poems. She is willing to love without doubts. I feel that Qu has a good artistic background and exuberant feeling, has some experience and self-examination(or introspection?), and wants to express also be heard, she has the potential and desires to become a real artist.
    February 14, 2017
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    Proofreading 2:Criticism Criticism of XU' work: XU has good visual imagination and image-building abilities .She is one of the photographers, the shot of boy's coming is designed, the mosquitos in the roof reflects the mood of the character , the lights in the mirror constructs a kaleidoscopic dream, and when the girl is climbing on the hillside are good ones. Meanwhile, the scene she dancing with the boy at the stairs is so shaking, and the last shot, I understand what she wants to express while the result is not ideal. I believe she could do better with some professional study and better equipment. About the music, it’s all her own taste thing, but I feel it is a little bit too much, can be better. Last flaw is the girl's acting. I highly suggest she could secede from acting.
    February 14, 2017
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