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I am learning English writing. I am here for language/culture exchange purpose.
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- criticism criticism : As for her photography, her color-sensitive ability also shows in her photos. She took those pictures with analog camera which proves she has fierce eyes and she is a quick catcher. She has her own humor and thoughts into those photos, while as photography, they have some connection problems. I suggest she could focuses on serious project, and notice the arrangement and sequence of pictures. I like her drawing, they show her unconstrained imaginary. Her photos, illustrations and film are in consistent style. She should keep it work, keep drawing. At last, her story Trees I think could be turned into a good script, it has characters, personalities, humorous and inversions. As for the outline concept, Help Me is cute story while she should extend it into a full script. The Good Ideas is a bad name, as the feature length film is nothing really big surprise. Her website is clear and has some designs and poems. I can feel her sensitive emotions in her poems. She is willing to love without doubts. I feel that Qu has a good artistic background and exuberant feeling, has some experience and self-examination(or introspection?), and wants to express also be heard, she has the potential and desires to become a real artist.February 14, 201710
- Proofreading 2:Criticism Criticism of XU' work: XU has good visual imagination and image-building abilities .She is one of the photographers, the shot of boy's coming is designed, the mosquitos in the roof reflects the mood of the character , the lights in the mirror constructs a kaleidoscopic dream, and when the girl is climbing on the hillside are good ones. Meanwhile, the scene she dancing with the boy at the stairs is so shaking, and the last shot, I understand what she wants to express while the result is not ideal. I believe she could do better with some professional study and better equipment. About the music, it’s all her own taste thing, but I feel it is a little bit too much, can be better. Last flaw is the girl's acting. I highly suggest she could secede from acting.February 14, 201710

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