Proofreading 2:Criticism Criticism of XU' work： XU has good visual imagination and image-building abilities .She is one of the photographers, the shot of boy's coming is designed, the mosquitos in the roof reflects the mood of the character , the lights in the mirror constructs a kaleidoscopic dream, and when the girl is climbing on the hillside are good ones. Meanwhile, the scene she dancing with the boy at the stairs is so shaking, and the last shot, I understand what she wants to express while the result is not ideal. I believe she could do better with some professional study and better equipment. About the music, it’s all her own taste thing, but I feel it is a little bit too much, can be better. Last flaw is the girl's acting. I highly suggest she could secede from acting.