criticism
criticism :
As for her photography, her color-sensitive ability also shows in her photos. She took those pictures with analog camera which proves she has fierce eyes and she is a quick catcher. She has her own humor and thoughts into those photos, while as photography, they have some connection problems. I suggest she could focuses on serious project, and notice the arrangement and sequence of pictures.
I like her drawing, they show her unconstrained imaginary. Her photos, illustrations and film are in consistent style. She should keep it work, keep drawing.
At last, her story Trees I think could be turned into a good script, it has characters, personalities, humorous and inversions.
As for the outline concept, Help Me is cute story while she should extend it into a full script. The Good Ideas is a bad name, as the feature length film is nothing really big surprise.
Her website is clear and has some designs and poems. I can feel her sensitive emotions in her poems. She is willing to love without doubts.
I feel that Qu has a good artistic background and exuberant feeling, has some experience and self-examination(or introspection?), and wants to express also be heard, she has the potential and desires to become a real artist.
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unconstrained imaginary should be correced as unbriddled imagination.
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