online museums and galleries

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historic objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Traditionally, people have to buy a ticket and queue up if they want to see any collection exhibited in a museum or <s>a</s> gallery. Nowadays, however, at the click of a button, they can enter a panoramic but private visual salon from the comfort of their own home. In my opinion, such digital engagement is still unlikely to completely replace physical exhibition centres <s>completely</s>.

On <s>the</s> one hand, virtual visits can be a viable alternative to museum-gallery hopping. Visitors do not need to <s>splash</s> tack on an extravagant flight ticket in order to see well-renowned works on the other side of the earth. Such convenience can be attributed to the fact that a great number of (national museums) in many countries have started to display an array of collections online. Additionally, with the technology of 360-degree videos and high-definition quality, viewers can have a fairly close-up <s>inspection</s> view <s>on</s> of the details of those <s>magnificent </s>pieces.

On the other hand, there are aspects of brick and mortar exhibitions that a website cannot <s>to</s> replicate. When visiting such places in real life, visitors are more likely to <s>immense</s> immerse themselves in its <s>the</s> historical or artistic ambiance <s>within a space</s>. <s>On the contrary</s> (When you put 'on the contrary' here, it makes it seem like you're giving a counter argument against something you've just said. You've already established that you're giving a counterpoint to your previous paragraph, so there's no need to put it here again) Furthermore, <s>they can hardly get that feeling</s> it can be hard to achieve the same sensation when viewing from home. Besides, online visitors lose the <s>chance</s> sense of serendipity— the <s>sense</s> act of wandering between artworks and encountering the unexpected. They are also deprived of social opportunities. Museums and galleries are places to swap opinions and share enthusiasms.

In conclusion, the viewing room is a telling indication of how <s>creations</s> pieces can be shown, offering historical heritage, as well as avant-garde works <s>which</s> that <s>we</s> one might have never <s>have</s> had access to. Nevertheless, its innate deficiencies, (brief recap of deficiencies, never say I in an essay!), mean that it would be a huge loss <s>for us</s> if real exhibitions were to vanish forever.

Practice makes perfect!

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(Note: in British English, practice is a noun and practise is a verb. In American English, practice is used for both the verb and noun. Also, you probably mean language, not idiom.)