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- La nieve y mi corazón Me importa la nieve. Miro a fuera de mi ventana y veo nieve blanca, pura y fría. Crecía con la nieve. Cuando era niña pasaba mucho tiempo a fuera en el invierno. Construía casitas, muñecos y ángeles de nieve con mi perrito y mi amiga. Con un nariz rojo y mejillas sonrosadas, entraba en mi casa y después de desvestirme la ropa mojada mi madre me traía un chocolate caliente para calentarme. Tengo miles de recuerdos de la nieve. Hoy cuando veo la nieva mi mente siempre piensa en mi infancia. El amor y cuidado de mi madre, las posibilidades que presenta la nieve como pizarra en blanca y el aire fresco rejuvenecían mi alma y mi corazón. La nieve me da esperanza que la vida tenga posibilidades infinitas y que si tuviera fría siempre será alguien que puede ayudar y calentarme.January 18, 201730
Please, wich is the same or wich is correct?
The car is my favourite means of transport. That's why I drive everywhere= I drive everywhere since the car is my favourite means of transport, = I drive everywhere due to the car is my favourite means of transport.You could say: Cars are my favorite means of transportation; that's why I drive everywhere. Or: I drive everywhere because cars are my favorite means of transportation. It's best not to use "due to" here.
2.- Any house may get burgled in the event I have set an burglar alarm. OR IN CASE?I think you mean: Any house can be burgled, so just in case I have set a burglar alarm. If that's what you mean "in the event" doesn't work.
3.-The alarm burglar will go off and ring loudly in case if there is a burglar-The burglar alarm will go off and ring loudly if there is a burglar.
6 They have set a alarm burglar as they dont want to suffer a burglary at home.= in order no to suffer a burglary at home/ or so as not to suffer...They have set a burglar alarm because they don't want to suffer a burglary at home. OR: so that they don't have to suffer a burglary at home. OR: so as to not suffer a burglary at home.
7.-There is been a crime. The police is here= The police is here that's because there is been a crime or the police is here that's why the police is here.There has been a crime. The police are here.
You can connect these by saying either:
The police are here because there has been a crime.
There has been a crime so the police are here.
8.The criminal is very intelligent. However the police discovered him= DESPITE THE FACT THE CRIMINAL WAS VERY INTELLIGENT THE POLICE.... IS SPITE OF BEING INTELLIGENT THE POLICE DISCOVERED THE CRIMINAL.The police discovered the criminal despite the fact that he was very intelligent.
The police discovered the criminal in spite of his intelligence.Despite the criminal's intelligence, the police discovered him.
In spite of the criminal's intelligence, the police discovered him.
0 votedDecember 20, 201612016 /12/9 ~❤️❤️
Last Friday was the best day ever ^^
It was my uncle's wedding day .
My looking was stunning ^_^ My look was stunning or I looked stunning
I Weared a blue dress . I wore a blue dress (to wear is irregular in past tense :))
Our bridegroom was so happy and his bride was so beautiful, I took a lot of funny and beautiful pictures for memories ^^ The bridegroom if you weren't the bride.
This day is one of the best days that I cannot ever forget it ever ~
God bless your life forever ❤Sounds lovely. I love weddings!
0 votedDecember 20, 20160Chicago Fire - Series
I have been watching all the seasons of the series "Chicago Fire" for all the seasons. I love this series! My favorites characters are Gabriela Dawson, Casey and Severide. Dawson and Casey are a perfect couple. Now, I love little Louie too. I think Severide should find a girlfriend for him. He is handsome and a good man.Other series I like are Chicago Med and Chicago PD. In Chicago Med my favorite character is Natalie and in Chicago PD it is Antonio. Antonio is Dawson's brother. There are others brothers characters characters that are brothers too, for exemple example doctor Will Halstead and detective Jay Halstead.
0 votedDecember 20, 20160- Una pregunta Trabajo como maestra y unos de mis estudiantes sólo hablan Español. Quiero decir algo que va a parar su mal comportamiento. Por ejemplo, cuando corren en la clase quiero decirles algo como "Stop! Knock it off!" pero en Español. No puede ser grosera o inapropiado para la escuela. ¿Podrían darme consejos sobre eso? Otra cosa quiero saber es como decir algo para llamar la atención de mis estudiantes. En inglés digo "All eyes on me!" o "Listening ears, please!". ¿Hay una frase en español que tendría el mismo efecto a los niños? Además, por favor corrijan lo que he escrito aquí. ¡Saludos!December 20, 201680
Before Sunrise is one of my favourites movies. It’s about a girl and a man who meet on a train to Vienna. They satpast tense next to each other, so he asked her what book was she reading, and with that they began past tense a conversation. As They got past tense along very well, so once they reached Vienna he dared past tense to ask her to accompany him to see the city so that they could it's a possibility spend the day together. However, he could Only spend the day because he had to go back to his country the next morning. "Ok", she said, and that’s how they spent past tense the following hours, walking around the city and talking.
But, he had past tense a flight to take, so in the morning, as soon the sun rose past tense, they said past tense goodbye to each other and promised to meet (past tense) again at that same place within 6 months. They could not email, send letters, nor call each other, they only had the promise of a future meeting.
What I like the most about this movie are both of the main characters. On the one hand, the man is like a child, without much knowledge about the world and without a clear perspective on life, but at the same time he’s full of energy, dreams and hopes. And On the other hand, the woman is very mature, calm, and a down to earth person, with a clear perspective and opinion on the world. They are quite different, but they complement each other well because he is attracted to this intelligent woman and, at the same time, she feels admired by this man.
Nice work, well written! Just note, in this piece you could use either present or past tense when talking about the movie, but you have to choose one and use it throughout. I choose past tense in my edits.
0 votedDecember 20, 20162Are diets bad? I cannot say "yes" or "no". There are a lot of different kinds of diets. Some people diet because they have excess weight and it's harmful to their health, some people are too thin, so they gain weight, and some people eat healthy food, which is a form of dieting as well. Diets like these are okay, but there are people who have low self-esteem. They think they are fat, ugly, etc., so they don't eat anything and only drink water. This is a terrible way to diet!
Wonderful job :) only minor errors
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