Hey, is it correct?
Are diet bad things? I cannot say "yes" or "no". There're a lot of kinds of diets. Some people diet because they have excess weight and it's in jurious to health, some people are too thin, so they gain weight and also some people eat healthy food, it's diet too. Diets like these are okey. But there are people who have low self-estem. They think they fat, ugly etc, they can eat nothing and only drink water. It's terrible way to diet!
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Hey, is it this correct?
Are diet bad things? [ Is dieting bad? / Is dieting a bad thing? / Is it bad to diet? ] I cannot say yes or no. There're There are a lot of many kinds of diets. Some people diet because they have excess weight are overweight and it's in jurious injurious to health, some people are too thin, so they gain weight, and also some people eat healthy food, it's which is a diet too. Diets like these are okey okay. But However, there are people who have low self-estem self-esteem. They think they are fat, ugly, etc., they can eat nothing can't eat anything and only drink water. It's That is a terrible way to diet!1
Are diets bad? I cannot say "yes" or "no". There are a lot of different kinds of diets. Some people diet because they have excess weight and it's harmful to their health, some people are too thin, so they gain weight, and some people eat healthy food, which is a form of dieting as well. Diets like these are okay, but there are people who have low self-esteem. They think they are fat, ugly, etc., so they don't eat anything and only drink water. This is a terrible way to diet!
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