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- My cat Hürrem I have a cat, it's black, its name is Hürrem, because in a TV series that its name is "El Sultán" (in México), there is a character her name is Hürrem, She is the Sultán Suleman´s wife, she's green eyes, and always takes care of her children, and my cat has the same characteristics, for that reason I put that name. It's came to my house since the beginning of October, first she stayed in the garden of my house, later on she got into my house (craftily). As my mom and I saw that the cat was well educated and didn't make trouble or mess, we decided adopted it. However, we seemed strange that she was fat without showing symptoms of pregnancy, we thought it's was sick but in early December it's began to search and get into places wide, lonely and comfortable from cardboard boxes, fruit baskets to our wardrobes and her belly grew more, then we realized that it was really pregnant. Finally, on December 7, the source was broken and their babies were born. They were 2 females and 2 males. Now my mom and I are grandparents jejejeje.December 31, 201820
Las redes sociales
Desde mi punto de vista, creo que las redes sociales son my polémicas ya que algunas personas piensan que son peligrosos para los jóvenes, sin embargo, por otro lado, otros creen que son buena fuente de ayuda para los alumnos porque les ayuda a estudiar para los exámenes iqué extraño!Personalmente, las redes sociales han mejorado mis notas a causa de las aplicaciones educacionales (o de educación). De hecho, algunos estudios nos demuestran que los estudiantes han mejorado sus notas en un 72% ya que de las por las redes sociales, iqué suerte!
Aunque hay muchas de ventajas, es importante que no olvidemos las desventajas sobre las redes sociales. No solo las redes sociales (Es mejor no repetir las palabras "las redes sociales") esas puede ser perjudiciales para los niños, sino que también el robo de información, es una situación que me preocupa mucho iqué pesadilla!.
En conclusión, creo que es esencial que el gobierno ayudemos nos ayude para hacer que el internet sea seguro para los jóvenes o serán mala para las futuras generaciones.
NOTA: - No es necesario poner la palabra "creo que". Porque ya empezaste la oración con "Desde mi punto de vista" como conector ordenador.
- "Que son peligrosos" porque el sujeto son "las redes sociales" (hablando gramaticalmente).
- Es mejor la palabra "porque" que "como".
- Cuando usas la palabra "que" entre signos de interrogación y admiración siempre llevará acento: ¡qué!, ¿qué?
- lo que esta subrayado en azul son otra opción que puedes agregar al comentario.
- lo que esta subrayado en amarillo son los cambios que le hicé.
0 votedNovember 15, 20180My dog
We have a dog Chihuahua named Lennon. It is 13 years old and it lives with my parents in Japan. We lived with it for 7 years, but when we decided to move to Australia, we left it with my parents because they loved it so much.
My daughter born in May of the last year, and we decided to go back to Japan on holiday to show her to our family. We are flying on Wednesday this week, and we had been looking forward to see to Lennon. However my mother said me that it have been very sick since last week because he had cervical hernia. It could´t even walk and eat anything. I am so worried about him and hoping that we can see it when we arrive in the parents place on Thursday.NOTES.
I was confused in your historic, because you talk about in past first and suddenly you talked in present.
Caution with the object pronoun because you use he and him, remember the animals and things their pronouns are: it.
I saw the word Chihuahua, I think that is the name of the race.
And i did´t understand with the sentence "in the parents place". Check it!
0 votedJanuary 14, 20171- My christmas day It was a good day to do many things and more when I am on Vacation. First I woke up at 8:30 a.m., after I praised a pray, and then I took a shower. In the breakfast my grandmother talks to my mother and I about a family reunion and she decided to invite all my family. I was exciting, because in every reunion family usually my cousins visit me and I play them anything, either in my room or in the garden. So the reunion was going to be at night!. In the afternoon, my grandmother and my mother cooked: Leg to plum, green spaghetti and codfish, and I bought a grapes sidra and lemonade and grape wine. The dinner finally it was ready! At night, the family it was reunited. My uncles and aunts talked about their travelled around of Veracruz and their traditional food. They talked about drama and comedy movies and functions of play in Coatzacoalcos. They invited me to play the "Familia de Diez" in Coatzacoalcos on 4th February. Ximena talked about her economic problems because she failed her job, but everybody comforted and encouraged her. And I played a game (snakes and ladders) with my cousins, we bet any money. We had fun and laughed too. And the food it was very delicious. Finally we had gift exchange. My aunts gifted me t-shirts, pans and a historic book, to my mother a cellphone, a necklace and earrings and to my grandmother rings, two pair of shoes, two pair of tennis and a sun glasses. My family and I had a great christmas day.January 14, 201730
My friends last week I went to Barcelona to see my friends Ana and José. I met them in 1975 when we were studying at the University. Ana is teaching French in an elementary school but José doesn’t have any job currently, he is a lawyer.
They have beautiful twins Lola and Marta who are now 14 years old now. They are studying at a public school and also they are studying music in a music school.You can use currently or nowadays, but currently is more frequently.
When you use the word twins you don´t use "a", because is for singular pronouns.
0 votedDecember 23, 20160The UFF's program
This year i decided to register at the UFF´s mobility program. This program is an opportunity to UFF's students to study a entire semester in a graduation's program around the world without affording the university's expenses, only living expenses. So this is my only way to entry in a american or canadian university, and for me this has been my biggest dream since forever.
First i register in the program website, then im going to take the TOEFL test and if i do get the scores i can be able to be in the program. That's because i'm in here writting about the program.
I belive my weekness is in the writting section, because i don't know how to use academic's words and use the gramma in the right way. I think the listening and the speaking sections will be my best scores because i usually see a lot of movies and listening to music in english.
Hopefully, i will get the scores i need and be able to enjoy in the UFF's Program.0 votedDecember 20, 20160
