My dog

We have a dog Chihuahua named Lennon. It is 13 years old and it lives with my parents in Japan. We lived with it for 7 years, but when we decided to move to Australia, we left it with my parents because they loved it so much.

My daughter born in May of the last year, and we decided to go back to Japan on holiday to show her to our family. We are flying on Wednesday this week, and we had been looking forward to see to Lennon. However my mother said me that it have been very sick since last week because he had cervical hernia. It could´t even walk and eat anything. I am so worried about him and hoping that we can see it when we arrive in the parents place on Thursday.

NOTES.

I was confused in your historic, because you talk about in past first and suddenly you talked in present.

Caution with the object pronoun because you use he and him, remember the animals and things their pronouns are: it.

I saw the word Chihuahua, I think that is the name of the race.

And i did´t understand with the sentence "in the parents place".  Check it!

My dog

We had a dog named Lennon. He is 13 years old (chihuahua?!) and lives with my parents in Japan now. We had lived with him for 7 years, but when we decided to move to Australia, we had left him at my parents' place because they loved him so much and he did as well.

My daughter was born in May last year, and we decided to go back to Japan on holiday to show her to our family. We are going to fly on Wednesday this week, and we were looking forward to seeing Lennon. However, my mother said that he has been very sick since last week because he has had Cervical hernia. He can't even walk and eat anything now. I am so worried about him and hope that we can see him when we arrive at my parents' place on Thursday.

My dog

We had a dog named Lennon. He was a 13 year old chihuahua and is now living with my parents in Japan. We lived with him for 7 years, but when we decided to move to Australia, we left him at my parents' place because they loved him so much and he as well.

My daughter was born in May last year, and we decided to go back to Japan on holiday to show introduce (showは間違いではないですけど、お娘さんをshowすることはなんか違和感です！）her to our family. We are flying on Wednesday this week, and we have been looking forward to seeing Lennon. However, my mother said that he has been very sick since last week because he has a cervical hernia. He can't even walk or eat anything now. I am so worried about him and hoping that we can see him when we arrive at my parents' place on Thursday.

えー！Lennonかわいそうです！泣

Lennonお大事に！

お娘さんおめでとうございます！＾＾

初めまして！みやこです！アメリカ人ですけど、今日本に住んでいます！

英語が本当に上手ですね！よく頑張りました！