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I'm about to be not a student I'm about to be not a student I had luch with Hien today. We ate “Mi Quang”. It’s an familiar restaurant of us. I used to come here everyday because I fell in love with this kind of food though it wasn’t cheap in comparison with other foods. I recommended it to most of my friends. hihi. My friends gradually like this food. This is a small restaurant on the CMT8 street. The first time I came here is with Tra who is a best friend in my dormitory. In fact, I had an bad impress about Tram when I met her at the first time. She’s short. Her face looks like a patient. It’s not all, she is unattrative. She studied hard at that time. I always met her when I went to the selfstudy room. Oneday, she and I were in accounting together. We were still not close to each other. She was in the same class with me. Then, our destiny came. In a pretty day, she invited me joined an research science project. I agreed. Inspite of hating her, I knew it was a huge advantage to join this project. If this project success, we’ll improve our GPA and have something to fill our CV, and be love by teacher. Besides, she was a hard students. So I though it’s no harm working with her. Our group has 2 more people. However, we chosen a subject that was very difficult to do research: the accounting information system. Our group went to a “quán nước” to discuss our project. It took us many hours chatting for nothing. We laugh every times some one say something. I realized they are all humor and social. We were best friend from that day on. However, something I don’t like is my roomates don’t like me be with Tram. I tried to tell good things about Tram to my roomates but nothing gonna changes. So I gave up do that. She has been my friend for 8 months. She has a group of friends containing about 10 people in the class. I played with them since I have been her friends. Some nights, we drank milk tea near to my dormitory and chatting so funny. When I had a problem, we told them and it took them less than 1 minites to make me laugh. My youth is going to end. I’ll have to leave this dormitory in 8 months. I don’t know how I live when I have to part who lived with me for 4 years. It must be sad. Then, they will find a guest house, find a job, be married and have a different life. Will they have free time for an appointment with old friends. I hope my friend success in their life. Wish you have an great intership and find a dreaming job.

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I'm about to be not a student

I'm about to be not a student

I had luch with Hien today. We ate “Mi Quang”. It’s an familiar restaurant of us. I used to come here everyday because I fell in love with this kind of food though it wasn’t cheap in comparison with other foods. I recommended it to most of my friends.
hihi. My friends gradually like this food. This is a small restaurant on the CMT8 street. The first time I came here is with Tra who is a best friend in my dormitory. In fact, I had an bad impress about Tram when I met her at the first time. She’s short. Her face looks like a patient. It’s not all, she is unattrative. She studied hard at that time. I always met her when I went to the selfstudy room. Oneday, she and I were in accounting together. We were still not close to each other. She was in the same class with me.

Then, our destiny came called. (we sometimes use this expression "destiny called" or "fate stepped in") In On a pretty sunny/fine day (if you mean the weather was good?) , she invited me to joined an research a science research project. I agreed. In spite of hating disliking her (hate is TOO strong!) , I knew it was a huge advantage great opportunity to join this project. If this project was successful, we’ll we'd improve our GP(what's that? - some Vietnamese measure of success?) and have something to fill our CV, and be loved (maybe "praised" is better) by teacher. Besides, she was a hard-working students. So I thought that it’s there could be no harm working with her. Our group also has 2 more other people. However, we chosen a subject that was very difficult to do research: the accounting information systems. Our group went to a “quán nước” to discuss our project. It took us We spent many hours chatting, but for nothing. We laughed every times some one someone (single word) say said something. I realized they are all very humorous and social. We were best friends from that day on.

AND NOW FOR YOUR FINAL PARAGRAPH (it would be better to write shorter pieces in future ;)

However, something I don’t like is that my roommates (personnaly, I prefer to write this with a hyphen "room-mates", which makes it easier to read) don’t like me to be with Tram. (probably better to say "...don't like me spending time with Tram"). I tried to tell say good things about Tram to my roommates but nothing is gonna changes. So I gave up doing that. She has been my friend for 8 months. She has a group of friends containing of about 10 people in the class. I have played with them since I have been her friends. Some nights, we drank drink (in general) milk tea near to my dormitory and chatting so funny. and laugh and chat together. When I had a problem, we I told them and it took them less than 1 minutes to make me laugh. My youth is going to end.But my time here is will come to an end. I’ll have to leave this dormitory in 8 months time. I don’t know how I will live when I have to am parted from those who lived with me for 4 years. It must will be sad. Then, They will all find a guest house new place to live, find a job, be get married and have a different life. Will they have free time for an appointment to meet with old friends. I hope my friends success in their life. Wish you have an great internship and find a dreaming your dream job.

DUNG - I WAS NOT SURE IF YOU ARE REFERRING TO JUST YOUR FRIEND TRAM OR ALL YOUR FRIENDS IN YOUR DORMITORY OR SCIENCE RESEARCH GROUP? ....SO WHETHER YOU NEED TO USE "SHE" OR "THEY".

I'm about to stop studying

I'm about to be not a student

I had lunch with Hien today. We ate “Mi Quang”. It’s our usual restaurant. I used to come here everyday because I fell in love with this kind of food though it wasn’t cheap compared to others. I recommended it to most of my friends.
hihi. My friends gradually came to like this food. This is a small restaurant on CMT8 street. The first time I came here was with Tra, my best friend in our dormitory. In fact, I had an bad first impression about Tram. She’s short. Her face looks sickly. It’s not that she is unattractive. She studied hard at that time. I always saw her when I went to the study room. One day, she and I were in accounting together. We were still not close to each other. She was in the same class with me.

Then, our destiny came. One fine day, she invited me to joined a research science project. I agreed. In spite of hating her, I knew it was a huge advantage to join this project. If this project succeeds, we’ll improve our GPA and have something to fill our CV, and be loved by teacher. Besides, she was a hard student. So I thought it’s no harm working with her. Our group had 2 more people. However, we chose a subject that was very difficult to do research: the accounting information system. Our group went to a “quán nước” to discuss our project. It took us many hours to say nothing. We laugh every time someone says something. I realized they were all jokers. We were best friend from that day on.

However, something I don’t like is that my roomates don’t like me to be with Tram. I tried to say good things about Tram to my roomates but nothing will change. So I gave up on that. She has been my friend for 8 months. She has a group of about 10 friends in the class. I played with them since being her friend. Some nights, we drank milky tea near to my dormitory and clowned around. When I had a problem, we told them and it took them less than one minute to make me laugh. My youth is going to end. I’ll have to leave this dormitory in 8 months. I don’t know how I will live when I have to leave those who lived with me for 4 years. It must be sad. Then, they will find a guest house, find a job, get married and have a different life. Will they have free time for old friends? I hope my friends succeed in life. I wish you have an great internship and find a dreamy job.

Very well written!

I'm about to be not a student

I'm about to be not a student

I had lunch with Hien today. We ate “Mi Quang”. It’s an a familiar restaurant of to us. I used to come here everyday because I fell in love with this kind of food though it wasn’t cheap in comparison with other foods. I recommended it to most of my friends.
hihi. My friends gradually like this food. This is a small restaurant on the CMT8 street. The first time I came here is was with Tra who is a best friend in my dormitory. In fact, I had an bad impression about Tram when I met her at for the first time. She’s short. Her face looks like a patient (??I don't understand what you mean). It’s That's not all, she is unattractive. She studied hard at that time (better to say "she was always studying" I think you mean that she was boring and no fun to have as a room-mate?). I always met her when I went to the self-study room. One day, she and I were in accounting class together. We were still not close to each other. She was just in the same class with me.

Sorry I cannot update because your total length exceeded 5000 characters (with comments?)

to rodolfo Ibarra: it's score you get when you're in a class. GPA is used to appreciate your study

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