"Buildings in Rio de Janeiro

The architecture of Rio de Janeiro is great. At the beginni<font style="background-color: yellow;">n</font>g, our major influence came from French and Portuguese architecture. In Rio's historical and commercial center<strike> is quite commum</strike> the mix between the old and modern buildings <font style="background-color: yellow;">is quite common</font>, and they can <strike>perfectly</strike> live <font style="background-color: yellow;">perfectly </font>together.
We have lots <font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font> natural beauties. The beaches, <strike>the </strike>mountains,<font style="background-color: yellow;"> and</font> lakes make our city unique. The most<font style="background-color: yellow;"> famous</font> Brazilian <strike>famous</strike> monument is called<font style="background-color: yellow;"> 'Christ the Redeemer'</font>. <font style="background-color: yellow;">Located</font> at the peak of the 700 metres<font style="background-color: yellow;"> tall</font>, Corcovado mountain, its construction started <strike>at </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">in</font> 1922, and it<strike> has</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> is</font> 38 metres <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">in height</font> with a beatiful city view.
Another awesome construction is our biggest stadium,<strike> called</strike> Maracanã. Maracanã received the Rio Olympic Games 2016 and the World Cup Final 2014. <strike>Builded </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">Built</font> in 1982, our tallest build<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> is called Torre do Rio Sul with 164 metres.
The most famous museum with amazing architecture is Niterói Contemporary Art Museum, constructed by our famous architect Oscar Niemeyer, with <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> marvel<font style="background-color: yellow;">l</font>ous combination of nature and architecture.
The Olympic Games brought us a new legacy <strike>and they are</strike>: Tomorrow Museum, Barra Olympic Park, <font style="background-color: yellow;">and an</font> improvement in public transport. But the most fascinating <font style="background-color: yellow;">thing</font> about Rio is the capacity to put together the old and new architecture <font style="background-color: yellow;">alongside</font> nature."

Muito bom o trabalho! tome cuidado com a ordem da sentaça. Seu inglês é muito avançado

Psychologist

I am a Psychologist and Social Worker (Sociaal Pedagogisch Hulpverleners). I started my career 10 years ago, working with children and youngsters at risk in social services.
Recently I have been doing an internship as a psychologist in Praktijk Stoutjesdijk in The Netherlands, where I have been working in the fields of trauma and attachment.
Currently, I'm starting a Masters degree in adoption and foster care, in order to update my knowledge and abilities in this field.
Specialties: Group Dynamics, Child in Social Exclusion, Child Protection System, Shelter house, Adoption and Fostering.

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Today

I woke up around 1pm and I went out to buy some bread.I bought bread and a betting [?]newspaper. I went home and prepared something for breakfast. I ate my breakfast, then read my newspaper and chose a match to bet on [with statistic than I was preparing for go to work and coupon].I arrived at* work at 6pm, the same time as my match.I bet all of my money because we need to be rich :)) Anyway, its over now and still I am not rich :)) I don't know anything about past tense. I hope the message is not all wrong

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* not sure if you are arriving at work or returning home from work. Could be ' I got home from work at 6pm'