Today
I woke up like 1pm and I went out side for buy bread.I bought bread and newspaper for iddaa.I came to my house and I was preparing something for breakfast. I ate my breakfast later read my newspaper and choose match for iddaa with statistic than I was preparing for go to work and coupon.I arrived my work 6pm and same time my match.I pay all my money for iddaa Because we need to be rich :)) Anyway all thing finished and now still I am not rich :)) I don't know nothing about for past tense.I hope all messege not wrong
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Today
I woke up around 1pm and I went out to buy some bread.I bought bread and a betting [?]newspaper. I went home and prepared something for breakfast. I ate my breakfast, then read my newspaper and chose a match to bet on [with statistic than I was preparing for go to work and coupon].I arrived at* work at 6pm, the same time as my match.I bet all of my money because we need to be rich :)) Anyway, its over now and still I am not rich :)) I don't know anything about past tense. I hope the message is not all wrongyellow = edit
green = optional added word
[red] = I have no idea, sorry
* not sure if you are arriving at work or returning home from work. Could be ' I got home from work at 6pm'
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I don't know why but your story was funny for me hahaha. I think you had an interesting day, I didn't understand everything but for what I saw your past tense is good. Have a nice day.
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