My new boarding place

I live in a boarding place with my friends. They are my collegues All of us work in a same place as software engineers. So we live a really happy lives. But unfortunately within the last month we had to face some problems with the house owners regarding to our behavior. So finally we decided to find a new boarding place.
It took us about two weeks to find a new boarding place. We searched on newspapers and advertisements web sites. Finally we could find a better boarding house which is very close to our work place.Tomorrow we are moving to our new boarding place.
In Sri Lanka there is a special statement, "Every thing works to our good". I feel it is true.

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Family

As we all know, parents are best teachers for their children. So what is the most important thing for children during their different stages of growth?

I think parents who are willing to spend more time and efforts on their children can provide a healthy environment for their children to grow well both in physical and mental activities. However, in China, some parents think that they are responsible for doing as much as possible to create chances for their children. When their children enter into the fierce competition society, some parents still worry about their children and make opportunities to help them to avoid some difficulties and frustrations. They believe it is the happy life for their children by protecting them from any hard time in life.

It can't deny that our parents' love is the most generous emotion in the world. But what is the best way to help children become maturer and stronger in the future? Do parents know what children really want (witout do as an auxilliary verb) to have during their growth process? I think if parents always give a hand in dealing with many things, it will perhaps make children become weaker in their independent ability. Furthermore, they lose confidence in study and work, because they don't believe that they can finish tasks just by themselves. Then children become unhappy gradually as they are anxious about whether they can overcome any problems that happen in their life by their own way. Therefore when children have their own decisions, it is better for parents to give some suggestions but not answers. Otherwise, it will result in the fact that children are lack of more and more competition and practice.

I deeply agree with the saying that your children are not your children, which is quoted from a poem written by Gibran. I think parents shall cultivate their children a good personality and encourage them to meet the challenges independently rather than escape the problems they encounter. All in all, what children want to have is a warm home where parents are like both teachers and friends who can communicate and trust with each other. I think it is the idealist and happiest family life in our modern society.

Topic: Introduce My Family

I came from a small family, there are four people in my family: they are my sister, my parents of course and myself. I just have one elder sister and I’m the youngest in the family, so my immediate family is quite small.Since my extended family is quite large, my father is one of five children, so I have a lot of cousins, who are kind of like of my brothers and sisters.
My father is 48 years old, his name is Phu and he is an electronic repairer, he is very humorous, he can tell funny jokes about any things, my father likes to drink tea in the morning and sometimes drink beer with his friends.
My mother is the same age of my father, her name is Nam, she is small business, she is very kind and has a gentle smile, she likes to watch TV, sing and listen to music, one of most her favorite songs is "Que Em Mua Nuoc Lu" which was performed by Phuong My Chi.
Finally, my sister is 24 years old, her name is Duc, she is an accountant working in my hometown. Currently, she is unmarried. Like my mother, she is gentle, caring and warm, she has lovely eyes and long black hair. She also likes to sing, sometimes we sing songs at Zing.Mp3 website that we like together, it makes we closer.
I love my family, we always have dinner together every day, my mother always cooks something delicious! Now, I’m currently a student far away from my hometown, so I don’t see my family so often, but we always make video chat on Facebook at the weekend, which is always very noisy but having lots of fun.

The Time

I thought that the Time was a something hurt stealing us our things, but now I know that the Time gives away many things, in each minute, second, before of hurt...

Toefl writing essay

The main discussion is whether the R.robustus mammals were an active hunters or they were just a scavenger.

According to the passage, the R.robustus were too small to hunt a psittacosaurus. One of which was found in one of the R.robustus stomach.
However, the lecture explains that even though there is a huge size differences between the R.robustus to the dinosaur, perhaps the psittacosaurus unhatched eggs had been eaten by the R.robustus.

In addition, the passage describes that R.robustus legs are way too short to chase dinosaurs. On the other hand, the lecture gives an explanation. Nowadays It is very common that modern mammals have short legs similar to R.robustus. As a result, modern mammals were actually faster than their ((((((preys))))))) and against all odds succeed to hunt them. To sum things up, If modern mammals similar to R.robustus were predators, we can now imagine ancient mammals as predators as well.

Furthermore, the dinosaurs that was found in the R.robustus stomach had no teeth marks on their bones, which could supply a terrific evidence. However, the lecture gives an answer for that. When the R.robustus hunted, it did not use their teeth but use their big jaws in order to swallow the whole or big pieces of the dinosaur.

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