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Topic: Introduce My Family I come from a small family, there are four people in my family: they are my sister, my parents of course and myself. I just have one older sister and I’m the youngest in the family, so my immediate family is quite small. Since my extended family is quite large, my father is one of five children, so I have a lot of cousins, who are kind of like of my brothers and sisters. My father is 48 years old, his name is Phu and he is an electronic repairer, he is very humorous, he can talk funny jokes about any things, my father likes to drink teas in the morning and sometimes drink beer with his friends. My mother is the same age with my father, her name is Nam, she is small business, she is very kind and have a gentle smile, she like to watch TV, sing and listen to music, one of most her favorite song is "Que Em Mua Nuoc Lu" is performed by Phuong My Chi. Finally, my sister is 24 years old, her name is Duc, she is an accountant working in my hometown. Currently, she is unmarried. Like as my mother, she is gentle, caring and warm, she has lovely eyes and long black hair. She also likes to sing, sometimes we sing songs at Zing.Mp3 website that we like together, it makes we closer. I love my family, we always have dinner together every day, my mother always cooks something delicious! Now, I’m currently a student far away from my hometown, so I don’t see my family so often, but we always talk video chat on Facebook at the weekend, which is always very noisy but lots of fun.

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Topic: Introduce My Family

I come from a small family. There are four people in my family: they are my sister, my parents of course and myself. I just have one older sister and I’m the youngest in the family, so my immediate family is quite small. Since My extended family is quite large since my father is one of five children, so I have a lot of cousins who are kind of like of my brothers and sisters.
My father is 48 years old, his name is Phu and he is an electronic repairer (Electrician?). He is very humorous, he can talk and tells funny jokes about anythings. My father likes to drink tea in the morning and sometimes drink beer with his friends.
My mother is the same age as my father, her name is Nam. She is has a small business and is very kind and have with a gentle smile. She likes to watch TV, sing and listen to music. One of most her her most favorite songs is "Que Em Mua Nuoc Lu" which is performed by Phuong My Chi.
Finally, my sister is 24 years old, Her name is Duc and she is an accountant working in my hometown. Currently, she is unmarried. Like as my mother, she is gentle, caring and warm. She has lovely eyes and long black hair. She also likes to sing and sometimes we sing songs at Zing.Mp3 website that we like together, it makes we closer.
I love my family, we always have dinner together every day. My mother always cooks something delicious! Now I’m currently a student far away from my hometown so I don’t see my family so often, but we always talk video chat on Facebook at on the weekend which is always very noisy but lots of fun.
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Topic: Introduce My Family

I came from a small family, there are four people in my family: they are my sister, my parents of course and myself. I just have one elder sister and I’m the youngest in the family, so my immediate family is quite small.Since my extended family is quite large, my father is one of five children, so I have a lot of cousins, who are kind of like of my brothers and sisters.
My father is 48 years old, his name is Phu and he is an electronic repairer, he is very humorous, he can tell funny jokes about any things, my father likes to drink tea in the morning and sometimes drink beer with his friends.
My mother is the same age of my father, her name is Nam, she is small business, she is very kind and has a gentle smile, she likes to watch TV, sing and listen to music, one of most her favorite songs is "Que Em Mua Nuoc Lu" which was performed by Phuong My Chi.
Finally, my sister is 24 years old, her name is Duc, she is an accountant working in my hometown. Currently, she is unmarried. Like my mother, she is gentle, caring and warm, she has lovely eyes and long black hair. She also likes to sing, sometimes we sing songs at Zing.Mp3 website that we like together, it makes we closer.
I love my family, we always have dinner together every day, my mother always cooks something delicious! Now, I’m currently a student far away from my hometown, so I don’t see my family so often, but we always make video chat on Facebook at the weekend, which is always very noisy but having lots of fun.
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Great job! You're doing well. I notice you use many commas where you can use full stops. But it's not a major issue as what you're saying is understandable :)

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