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As we all know, parents are the best teachers for their children. So, what is the most important thing for children during their different stages of growth? > If not, then who do you think is the most important person to a child during their various stages of growth?
I think parents who are willing to spend more time and efforts pay attention to their children can will have provide  a healthy environment at home for the well being of their children, in which they can develop both to grow well in physically and mentally. .activities. However, This is no different in China. Some Chinese parents think that they are responsible for doing whatever they can as much as possible to create chances for their children. When their children enter into the fiercely competitive job market in our  society, some parents they still worry about their children and make opportunities try to help their children with their problems  so that they do not feel  to avoid some difficulties and frustrated. They believe that it is necessary of them to protect their children by whatever means to ensure that their children will have a happy life, one without any hardship. the happy life for their children by
It can't is undeniable deny that our parents' love the love given to us by our parents is one emotion that is shown to us most generously-- on one else can match their love for us.. given of emotion feeling in the world. But what is the best way to help children become more mature and stronger in the future? Do parents really know what do  their children really want in life to have when they are growing up during their growth process? I think if parents who like to interfere in the lives of their children and not letting them deal with their own problems give a hand in dealing with many things, it will perhaps make them children become weaker in lose their independent ability to be independent. Furthermore, they will lose their self-confidence in their study or at work, because they don't believe that they can finish any task just by themselves without help. Then the children will become unhappy, gradually for they are getting more anxious about whether they can overcome any problem  that happen they may face in their lives by on their own way. Therefore, when children have made their own decisions, it is better for parents to  give some suggestions only, but not deciding for them on what they should do. for them answers. Otherwise, it will result in the fact that their children having of less and less experience in the competitive world today due to a lack of exposure to it.
I deeply firmly/totally agree with the saying, that "Your children are not your children," which is a quote from a poem written by Gibran. I think parents shall should cultivate inculcate in their children of the importance  of having positive personality traits a good personality and encourage them to meet their challenges independently rather than escape avoid the problems they encounter. All in all, what children want to have is a warm home where parents are like both teachers and friends, who can communicate and trust with each other a lot. I think this is the an idealistic family life to have in our modern society, one that is the happiest.