Wash my Friend's Car!!

I washed my friend's car. I was asked to wash it because I lost the game which I played with my friend!
The game was really fun! We tried to hit the toy's head with a hammer and the winner was the person who could make the head pop off!
I needed to wash my friend's car as a penalty.

Very well written.  There were just a couple little mistakes with verb tense.  That sounds like a very fun game and I'm sure your friend appreciated you washing his car.  :) 

If you look the word success up in the dictionary, it will be before the word "work." The letter "s" comes before the letter "w." However, in life, to have success you have to do something, you have to work for it. Success doesn't just happen without effort or work. Work comes first, then success. I hope that helps.

Essay : environmental damage in big cities

Hi everyone,

I would like you to correct this essay for me. Thanks in advance!

Environmental Damage in Big Cities

Our world is being damaged more and more over time. Furthermore, we are contribuiting to it every time we use our cars and throw litter in the sea. Consequently, it is our fault and we should make humans the only rescuer of our planet.

Something people cannot live without is cars, which pollutes the air. What's more, it is a dangerous means of transport. In order to help the planet and avoid accidents, citizens could use public transport from time to time. It is safer and pollutes less the air we all breathe.

Nevertheless, not only is the air contaminated, seas and rivers are also being affected, which can kill animals that live in them. We can avoid this by, for instance, not allowing people to eat or drink on the beach. Also, many species of animals are endangered because of us. This problem can be solved if we all do our bit.

Not only are seas and rivers polluted, forests are full of litter, because people do not take care of them. As well as that, there are many fires which put in danger animals and people.  (I would change this sentence to say: In addition to that, there are many fires which put animals and people in danger.) This could change if the entrances to forests were restricted.

To sum up, we can change and save our planet by making a plan and making everybody take part in it.