Wash my Friend's Car!!
I washed my friend's car. I was asked to wash it because I lost the game which I played with my friend!
The game was really fun! We tried to hit the toy's head with a hammer and the winner is a person who can make the head pop off!
I needed to wash my friend's car as a penalty.
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Washing (or "I washed) my Friend's Car!!
I washed my friend's car. I was asked to wash it because I lost the game which I played with my friend!The game was really fun! We tried to hit a (you haven't mentioned the toy yet so you need "a" ) toy's head with a hammer and the winner was the person who could make the head pop off!
I needed to wash my friend's car as a penalty.
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Wash my Friend's Car!!
I washed my friend's car. I was asked to wash it because I lost the game which I played with my friend!The game was really fun! We tried to hit the toy's head with a hammer and the winner was the person who could make the head pop off!
I needed to wash my friend's car as a penalty.
Very well written. There were just a couple little mistakes with verb tense. That sounds like a very fun game and I'm sure your friend appreciated you washing his car. :)
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