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- 1) "It's difficult for me." 2) "After the hiring process, how long will it take before I start working?" (I understand your sentence, but we usually describe this question in a lengthier way. My example is one way to ask this.) 3) "When I finish with my work (<< more natural way to word this), can I stay late to learn more from my coworkers or help them if they need anything?" (Once again, a possible way to word this but there are many other ways you could explain this same idea.) 4) "no, I didn't / no, I didn't do it" (Both are correct. The first sounds more natural. The second would probably be more appropriate for situations where you are adding emphasis.) 5) "I have wanted to be here for a long time." (This sounds natural. If you say "since," you would do better to choose a specific moment in time--such as "since I was a child." 6) "walking" 7) "You have to sweep, clean, study and learn." (If you say "both," this word refers to the presence of two items, tasks, etc. However, you are referring to more than two items here.)0 votedFebruary 14, 20181
- A bailar todos los días Ayer, fui a un evento de baile en el stilo de los 1940. He bailando esto estilo por 8 años. Anoche fue un baile de máscaras. Todavía hay escarcha (? glitter?) en mis ojos de mi máscara roja. Este noche, probablemente voy a ir a un evento de kizomba, un baile de Africa. Esto evento será la primera vez que bailo esto estilo de Africa.January 20, 201851
- Cuando una persona no puede salir de una piscina Ayer, yo fui a un evento de intercambio de idiomas. En español e inglés, hablamos sobre la construcción de músculos en los brazos—porque algunas personas ahí los gusta el deporte de fisicoculturismo. Quería contar una historia de mi vida pero no tenía el vocabulario, entonces estoy practicando ahora. Cuando era más joven, yo jugaba el fútbol. (En los Estados Unidos, las muchachas usualemente jugan el fútbol y los muchachos jugan el fútbol americano porque el fútbol americano es un deporte de contacto.) Por esto, tenía muchos músculos en las piernas, pero mis brazos estaban muy débiles. Un año, cuando tenía 16 años, competí en un equipo de natación. Para la competencia final, fuimos a una universidad grande en el centro de la ciudad. Nadé en mi competencia, pero al final, descubrí que no podía salir de la piscina. La piscina era de tamaño olímpico y estaba en el suelo. El piso estaba mas que 1 metro por encima del nivel del agua en la piscina. No tenía la fuerza en mis brazos. Los siguientes competidores necesitaban comenzar. Pero yo no podía salir de la piscina. Un padre de una otra muchacha agarró mis brazos. Él intentó levantarme, pero mido un metro 70 centímetros y peso 70 kilos. No soy una persona pequeña. El padre no pudo levantarme de la piscina. A este momento, un otro padre ayudó al primer padre, y juntos, los dos me levantaron. Entonces, desde cuando tenía 16 años hasta ahora, es mi sueño a tener brazos fuertes porque a veces personas necisitan salir de la piscina.January 15, 201820
- Mi Estilo de Aprender Yo diría que soy una aprendiz visual, pero recuerdo por auditivo. Primero, debo ver la información para comenzar un recuerdo. Segundo, debo escuchar la información para reforzar la memoria. Por ejemplo, puedo leer nuevas palabras de vocabulario, y puedo mirar telenovelas a escuchar las palabras en conversación real.January 12, 201861
A short story
Could someone correct it, please? Thank you very much
It is not easy to be a good person and keep calm. I can’t couldn't never stood stand (<< to show past tense, you would adjust the modal "can" rather than the following verb) the neighbor who terrorized his wife,. (<-- this point marks the end of a complete sentence. Use a semi-colon here to connect the clauses into one sentence or use a period and create a new sentence in the following clause.) I hated people who mistreated the animals or the caregiver who shook and shouted to the defenseless elderly. And now I can’t stand that rude jailer who don’t doesn't (<--subject-verb agreement) lend let me to (<-- the verb following "let" is a bare infinitive; in other words, this following verb does not need a "to" in the infinitive form) read in silence.Feedback: Just a few corrections--primarily in regards to punctuation. I like the twist ending!
0 votedJanuary 12, 20180If you could cry on anyone's shoulder, whose would it be?
I would cry on my mother's shoulder.
My mother is very kind.We often go shopping, and go eating,. We (<-- "We" begins a new sentence. Use a period or semi-colon after "eating") are on very good terms.
So I say to tell my mother everything.
Now, I live by myself, but I talk to her by cellphone.on the phone. (<-- this wording sounds more natural to me in my dialect, American South English.)
However, we often quarrel over trifles.
But (<-- Add a transition word here to guide the reader) the next day I always (<-- you can use the "present simple "make up" within this sentence if you are describing a common occurrence; use the adverb "always" to emphasize that your resolving things with your mother afterwards is a common occurrence) make up with her immediately!0 votedJanuary 12, 20181TIME IS MONEY BUT MONEY IS NOT TIME
Use your time well during while you still sees (subject-verb agreement), move, listen, talk, and feel. Absolutely time is not back again Time lost can never be regained (<< more natural way to word this sentence). Sure..!!!, all you (<< need a subject here) need is money and time, but unlike money, time is not back again cannot be regained and money can back anytime. (<< more natural way to word this sentence.) Both can be pursued whenever you want. but not with the time can, his keeps moving away from us can never be caught (<< I'm using language here that follows your earlier metaphor of chasing--pursuing--time and money; in other words, you can chase time and money but only money can be caught; time is elusive.)0 votedJanuary 5, 20180

