A short story
Could someone correct it, please? Thank you very much
It is not easy to be a good person and keep calm. I can’t never stood the neighbor who terrorized his wife, I hated who mistreated the animals or the caregiver who shook and shouted to the defenseless elderly. And now I can’t stand that rude jailer who don’t lend me to read in silence.
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A short story
Could someone correct it, please? Thank you very muchIt is not easy to be a good person and stay calm. I can’t stand by while the neighbor terrorizes his wife. I hate people who mistreat animals and the caregivers who shake and shout at defenseless elderly people. I also can’t stand rude jailers who won’t let me to read in silence.
A summary sentence might help like I can’t stand bullies or I can’t stand injustice
This is my opinion. Good job. Susan
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A short story
Could someone correct it, please? Thank you very muchIt is not easy to be a good person and keep calm. I can’t couldn't never stood stand (<< to show past tense, you would adjust the modal "can" rather than the following verb) the neighbor who terrorized his wife,. (<-- this point marks the end of a complete sentence. Use a semi-colon here to connect the clauses into one sentence or use a period and create a new sentence in the following clause.) I hated people who mistreated the animals or the caregiver who shook and shouted to the defenseless elderly. And now I can’t stand that rude jailer who don’t doesn't (<--subject-verb agreement) lend let me to (<-- the verb following "let" is a bare infinitive; in other words, this following verb does not need a "to" in the infinitive form) read in silence.
Feedback: Just a few corrections--primarily in regards to punctuation. I like the twist ending!
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