My Half Day

Corrected

My amazing Sunday started with heavy rain. I woke up at 9:00 am. I had a quick shower and a tasty breakfast with my lovely wife. I went to work by bus. I reached the office at ten o’clock am. My manager was extremely angry. He had waited for me for two hours. I started my work by reading emails. After, I called customers to schedule meetings. My first meeting was in the Khobar Tower. In this meeting, we discussed how the company I work for can provide the best services for them.After I finished the hard (difficult) meeting, I had lunch with my mate in a Chinese restaurant.

my honey moon trip - part1

My wedding was on the 23rd of January 2015. It finished at midnight. Then my wife and I went to a small hotel to spend a lovely night. The day after our wedding, we took a trip to Kuala Lampur by Itehad airways. We reached Kuala Lumpur after 13 hours of travelling. One the first day we went to the city centre. The city centre has an amazing garden called Pardana. It is a big forest with many small lakes. After the garden, we visited the national museum of Kuala Lumpur. There we saw the oldest weapon in Malaysia, farmer’s labour tools, and national dresses. We finished our city centre tour by visting the big sultan mosque. On the second day, we went to the Sun Way Lagoon Resort, where we enjoyed playing water games, swimming, and watching wild animals.

On the third day, we went to Seven Wills. Seven Wills is located 30km north of Kuala Lumpur. We spent an amazing five hours swimming, and watching monkeys. We took colourful photos there.

On the night of the third day, we went to the Twins Tower. We watched the dancing fountain. It was the highest fountain in the world. After that we went back to the hotel to sleep.

First time in Italki

Please correct my sentences I wrote.

add word = green

I climbed Mt.Nyoho which is located near the city of Nikkou in the Tochigi prefecture of Japan. I was so excited when I walked on the snow! Finally, winter's coming after the so long summer.

I climbed this mountain to examine it in advance for the next climbing trip. (not sure what you are trying to say here. Does not make sense but I will guess). I'm going to climb this mountain once again in next January with members of the mountain climbing club's members.

I'm taking on playing the role of leader at that time so I need to find the places where we can set up a tent. Because it would be very difficult to climb for just one day when it is covered with lots of snow so we need to camp overnight.

Mt.Nyoho has completely turned yellow and red. On top of that, it already started to wear a winter clothes (does not make sense. Do you mean the leaves?). Even though I couldn't enjoy the view on the top because of the bad weather,  I was satisfied. I can't take all of them at once (does not make sense). Since the bad weather keeps the ices and snow from the sun, so I could enjoy it (does not make sense. I can't get what you are trying to say). I hope I can see the fabulous scenery on the next climbing trip in January.

You have a good start here but some sentences do not make sense.

English sentences

Correct sentence:

The English textbook is in my car. I will bring it in from the car.

or

I will bring the english textbook in from my car.

Delete = delete

Add words = add words

Today morning

Today I woke up at eight a.m. today because my daughter called me from her bedroom. My daughter is one year old and she is just starting to speak. Her soft voice called me from the bedroom: "Dad." She can to say also - Mama, Katya — it is name my wife— and that is all. I took the baby out of bed and we went to the living room where we keep her toys. My child immediately began to view her books and after she has played with her toys.

bold = added

strikethrough - delete

highlight = my comments

My presentation

My name is Chiara! I am 25 years old, but, on 7th October 7 there it is my birthday!

I study  (do you study for triathlons? or study in school? You could say I study english every day, and I train for triathlons every day. Or...I study english, and train for triathlons every day. ) ,and I training every day for triathlons every day. games.
In my opinion, learning another language is very important; for example, in Italy there are few people who speak english... and I want to increase improve that number!

Bye