Could someone help me with my first letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been living in a room in this college for 6 month. This room is very good, there a good furniture and excellent location. But, this room is shared with more 2 students, and the last one stared shared this room about 1 month ago.
I am very disappointed with this new student, because he has been disturbing me since he started living with us. Every single day, he arrives about 2 p.m. and he went to kitchen to do his lunch, and he does a lot of noise. We can’t still sleep while he is coking.
As we are having problems, I suggest moving the new student to other room. We already explained for him our problem, but he does not care. There are other room available close on this one, so, it is not a problem for the student move for a new room. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been living in a room in this college for 6 months. This room is very good, there is good furniture and it is in an excellent location. But However, this room is shared with two more 2 students, and the last one started sharinged this room about 1 month ago.
I am very disappointed with this new student because he has been disturbing me since he started living with us. Every single day, he arrives about 2 p.m. and he went goes to the kitchen to do make his lunch, and he does makes a lot of noise. We can’t still even sleep while he is coking.
As we are having problems, I suggest moving the new student to another room. We already explained for him our problem, but he does not care. There are other rooms available close on this one, so, it is not a problem for the student move for to a new room. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Could someone help me with my first letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,I have been living in a room in this college for 6 month months. This room is very good, there a are some good furniture and an excellent location. But, this room is shared with more 2 2 more students, and the last one stared shared started sharing this room about 1 month ago.
I am very disappointed with this new student, because he has been disturbing me since he started living with us. Every single day, he arrives about 2 p.m. and he went goes to the kitchen to do prepare his lunch, and he does makes a lot of noise. We can’t still even sleep while he is coking cooking.
Since As we are having problems, I suggest moving the new student to other another room. We already explained for to him our problem, but he does not care. There are other room rooms available close on to this one, so, it is not a problem for the student move for to a new room. Looking I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Could someone help me with my first letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,I have been living in a room at in this college for 6 months. The room is very good, there is a good furniture and it is in an excellent location. But, I share this room is shared with more 2 students, and the most recent last most one started sharing this room about 1 month ago.
I am very disappointed with this new student, because he has been disturbing me since he started living with us. Every single day, he arrives home at about 2 p.m. and goes he went to kitchen to make do his lunch, and he makes does a lot of noise. We can’t still sleep while he is cooking.
As we are having problems, I suggest moving the new student to another room. We already explained for him our problem to him, but he does not care. There are other room available close to on this one, so, it is not a problem for the student to move to for a new room. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Could someone help me with my first letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,I have been living in a room in this college for 6 months. It is very good, has good furniture and is in an excellent location but this room is shared with more 2 students, and the last one came about 1 month ago.
I am very disappointed with this new student, because he has been disturbing me ever since he started living with us. Every day, he wakes up about 2 am. and goes to the kitchen to cook, and makes a lot of noise. We can’t sleep while he is cooking.
As we are having problems, I suggest moving the new student to another room. We already explained for him our problem, but he does not care. There is another room available close to this one, so, it is not a problem for the student to move there. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Very well written!
Yours faithfully
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