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    你好。我十一月打算去海南。我很高兴,如果我可以和你一起逛街,我会很高兴

    如果你住在海南,请给我写信:)如果你不住在海南,那么也可以给我写信:)



    写的很好!我帮你稍微修改了一下。祝你玩的开心!


    Susan

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    August 27, 2016
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    How can I describe someone (not appearence) ?

    Hello everyone, give me a tips for describeing someone.

    How I should do the introduction?
    I will tell for you a little bit about my mom. She's a stronger decisive (not phisical) womem, and she does everything for to help your her family and friends, but she's  gets nervous easily about silly trivial things. Anyway she get easily is easy-going to and can talk with people strangers around her naturally.



    Nice work!

    I am impressed by your description of your mom. You've done a really Good job on introducing people to thers!

    I help you reconstructe some sentences and change some words.:)

    Susan

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    August 26, 2016
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    Wow that was cute :p
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    August 25, 2016
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    A Tour to Shanghai Library Today I went to the Shanghai Library. It is so hot outside during the summer, and library is a nice place for me to relax and stay cool. Shanghai library is really big with huge amounts of book collections. I registed an acount and got a permission to borrow books. But I didn't borrow any books because Shanghai library is too far away from my home and returning books is kind of inconvenient. I just want to enjoy a nice afternoon there with interesting books. To my surprise, there are not only books, but also rare traditional calligraphy works and many other famous things. I enjoyed myself so much in the library.
    August 25, 2016
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    how about it,

    The weather is going to rain. i suggest that you to don't forget should bring take your umbrella


    I just think it is more fluent:) Maybe yours is better than mine:)

    BTW it is really Nice weather here In my country.

    Susan

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    August 25, 2016
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    The Berlin Wall

    This is a brief summery of which I did after reading a few paragraphs I read about the Berlin wall.

    This reading dealt with use the Berlin wall as topic, which was made German to divide Into two parts, east and west into two parts.
    The Berlin wall was built by the communist government of the East Germany to keep the people inside who lived in the western part of Germany from coming to another side.

    With the past of the time, many people tried to escape from east to west by jumping over the wall, unfortunely, some of them were killed by communist soldiers and some of the people that could survive after an unsuccessful attempt of escaping was arrested and sent to prison.

    In 1989, The government of East Germany decided to tear down the wall and many people helped to destroy the wall.


    Super work!

    I love your summary about the historical wall.I am intersted In history, too!

    Susan:)

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    August 25, 2016
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    smoking

    Do you want to die quickly? The majority of smokers does not know the danger of smoking. Danger of smoking is not only on them but on others around them. It has dangerous effect on both the smokers themselves and people who are around them.  First of all, the smoke smoking is a cause of cancer if you still smoke for a long time. Second, the smoke smoking also affects the way you think and also always makes you tense. Also, people who smoking smoke too match much their skin will be become darker dark color.What's more, buying cigarettes affects the monthly salary. Then Also, the smoke smoking affects strongly the children around smokers without feeling without being awared. The Pregnant women who smoke may be even killed fetus.


    Nice work! I help you rearrange some of your sentences.

    I really agree with your opinion on smoking. To my joy, my father gave up smoking five years ago and now everyday my family can breathe fresh air!


    Susan

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    August 25, 2016
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    A Sad Tuesday Yesterday was Tuesday, I got up early in the morning to catch the bus. But when I passed through an housing estate, I saw a thing that shocked me a lot. It was a little cat that was killed by cars. I know it was a really young one because I played with it just last month. I felt so sad that I wanted to cry for it. Kids who played around also came to that little cat and cried. Drivers should pay great attention when they want to drive their cars. Maybe check under the car because at the bottom of the car it is usually cooler than outside In summer and warmer in winter. Thus, cats often stay there though it is dangerous.
    August 25, 2016
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    The First one you should choose "have done" because when the speaker was saying that, he still hasn't been to New Manila, so the situation that he hasn't live outside Korea is still happening. The Second one you should choose"had done" for the speaker just saw the reaction and the situation that the speaker Never saw the reaction has been changed already. ;)
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    August 23, 2016
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    August 23, 2016
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