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A Sad Tuesday Yesterday was Tuesday, I got up early in the morning to catch the bus. But when I passed through an housing estate, I saw a thing that shocked me a lot. It was a little cat that was killed by cars. I know it was a really young one because I played with it just last month. I felt so sad that I wanted to cry for it. Kids who played around also came to that little cat and cried. Drivers should pay great attention when they want to drive their cars. Maybe check under the car because at the bottom of the car it is usually cooler than outside In summer and warmer in winter. Thus, cats often stay there though it is dangerous.

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A Sad Tuesday

Yesterday was Tuesday, I got up early in the morning to catch the bus. But when I passed through an housing estate, I saw a thing that shocked me a lot. It was a little cat that was killed by cars. Iknow it was a really young one because I played with it just last month. I felt so sad that I wanted to cry for it. Kids who played around also came to that little cat and cried.
Drivers should pay great attention when they want to drive their cars. Maybe check under the car because at the bottom of the car it is usually cooler than outside In SUMMER and warmer in winter.


through a housing area  not an housing estate


Drivers should pay attention when they are driving.


They should check under their cars because during the summer a cat might go under a car to keep cool, and they may also be under a car during the winter to keep warm.

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