smoking
Do you want to die quickly? The majority of smokers does not know the danger of smoking. Danger of smoking is not only on them but on others around them. There are some of the effect of the smoking. First of all, the smoke is a cause of cancer if you still smoke for a long time. Second, the smoke also affects the way you think and also always makes you tense. Also, people who smoking too match their skin will be dark color. Buy cigarettes affect the monthly salary. Then, the smoke affects strongly the children around you without feeling. The pregnant woman who smoke may be killed fetus.
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smoking
Do you want to die quickly? The majority of smokers does not know the dangers of smoking. The danger of smoking is not only on them but on others around them as well. There are some of the effects of the smoking. First of all, the smoke is a cause of cancer if you still smoke for a long time. Second, the smoke also affects the way you think and also always makes you tense. Also, people who smoke too mutch their skin will be dark colo have darker skin. Buying cigarettes affects the monthly salary. Then, the smoke strongly affects the children around you without feeling (?). The pregnant woman who smoke may be killed the fetus , too.1
smoking
Do you want to die quickly? The majority of smokers does not know the danger of smoking. Danger of smoking is not only on them but on others around them. It has dangerous effect on both the smokers themselves and people who are around them. First of all, the smoke smoking is a cause of cancer if you still smoke for a long time. Second, the smoke smoking also affects the way you think and also always makes you tense. Also, people who smoking smoke too match much their skin will be become darker dark color.What's more, buying cigarettes affects the monthly salary. Then Also, the smoke smoking affects strongly the children around smokers without feeling without being awared. The Pregnant women who smoke may be even killed fetus.Nice work! I help you rearrange some of your sentences.
I really agree with your opinion on smoking. To my joy, my father gave up smoking five years ago and now everyday my family can breathe fresh air!
Susan
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Smoking depress the human brain and cause LUNG CANCER as you said before , a lot of its side effects have written onto the cigarette box but the smokers don't care , aslo as you said they will kill themselves as they will kill us :(
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