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    Essay for TOEFL(English test) Question; “ When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the question above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. People who want to succeed will work very hard to make it happens. I disagree with the provided statement because a luck is an important factor for success. The definition of success depends on people. Some people think when they became rich, it means they succeed. On the other hand, some people think when they achieve their goals, it is a success for them. I believe that hardworking will bring luck to people who want to succeed. While you are not working hard and not ready for success, you will not be able to take a chance. The important thing to succeed is getting ready to get a chance and then take a certain action. For example, when you want to start your own business, it is very important to meet a person who wants to support your idea and gives you funds. He may want to give you some beneficial advice and help you to expand your networking which accelerates your business growing faster. While you are working hard to get a chance and use the chance in a proper way, it will increase your chance to succeed. My goal is to pursue my profession at graduate school and gain working experience in the USA. To make this happens, I have been working and studying hard to get ready when I get a chance. Before you get a chance, there are many things you have to do. To succeed in college, you need to make enough money for tuition and keep your grades high. After you did all the hard work, you will be able to get into your dream college. Grades and other materials can be enhanced by your hard work, but getting into your dream college is, so to speak, a luck. In all, not only hard work but also luck are vital to succeed. People must work hard to get ready and then when a chance comes, you need to get it.
    October 12, 2016
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    Essay for TOEFL(English test) Question; Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. People have their own preferences what kind of cities they want to live in. Choosing a place you live in is a big life changing decision making so that people need to think about it carefully. Both living in a small town and living in a bid city have advantages and disadvantages. When you choose to live in a small city, you will be able to enjoy nature and vast space. Also, it is easy to get along with people live in a small town and it makes you feel like a family member. On the other hand, living in a big city is exciting. You can get many opportunities, such as careers and educations. In a big city, there are many companies and schools so that you can choose the right place to work or study. Moreover, most of the big cities have advanced transportation systems which will take you anywhere you want easily. If I have to choose a place to live in, I prefer to live in a big city and I feel this way for 2 reasons. First, as I said, I will have many job opportunities when I live in a big city. For example, I have been working for an Information Technology company and if you live in a small town, it would be difficult to find job openings. In a small town, job openings are extremely limited and there is no big company there so I will not be able to make enough money to take care of my family. Second, School in a small town does not provide a variety of degrees or diplomas. If they do not teach the subject you want to pursue, you need to move out of a town. Also, a small town has a small population of young people and children so that they will not be able to have an advanced facility which is a big disadvantage for children. In conclusion, I prefer to live in a big city because of many opportunities of educations and careers which will lead a fulfilling life.
    October 12, 2016
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    Essay for TOEFL(English test) Question; How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. Movies or television are very common relaxation for many people. People love to watch movies or television on evening or weekend and spend a good time with their families or friends. Movies or television have advantages and disadvantages which will affect people’s actions. One of the good influence of movies or television is giving awareness to people. For example, when I watched a documentary about global warming, it gave me a big impact that how global warming effects not only to the environment but also to people and animals. After I watched it, I started to choose better things that protect the environment. In addition, movies or television have an educational aspect. Through watching movies or television, people can be educated unconsciously. People can get a new piece of knowledge from it so that people can be aware of things that they were not before. This is a good example to show a preferable influence that movies or television give to people’s behaviors. On the other hand, television or movies can influence people’s behaviors in a bad way. It is often said that violent scenes can cause the problem to young people because they cannot distinguish from reality to fiction. When young people watch violent scenes on the television, these images strongly remain their memories and they tend to do the same behaviors that took in the movies or television without thinking. Violent is not acceptable in the real world so that their parents need to teach their children well. Moreover, people can waste their time with television or movies for hours. Not all the TV programs or movies are good for people. For example, comedy movie is enjoyable and funny so that many people can watch it for a long time, but it can take precious time from people. In conclusion, movies or television can influence people’s action both in a good and bad way. It is people’s choice that how they watch or what they watch so that people need to be smart and educated enough to pick up a right program for them.
    October 8, 2016
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    Essay for TOEFL 2(English test) Essay for TOEFL(English test) I am trying to improve my writing skills :) It would be very grateful if you let me know mistakes! Thank you in advance. *　*　*　*　*　* Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Parents are the most important persons for children. Children spend most of time with their parents especially when they are younger ages, and it influences children’s whole life. I agree that parents are the best teachers for children which I will explore in my following essay. First of all, parents are the first persons who children spend time with, and they spend most of the time in their younger ages, which is the most important time period for person’s development. While spending time with parents, children learn many things from them not only education but also lifestyle or eating habits. It is said that how people spend time in their younger age influences on people’s entire life. If people get a good life routine in their childhood, this good hobby would last for their adulthood, too. For example, if parents prefer to feed healthier food to their children, their children naturally choose to eat healthier food even if they move out of parents’ house and they would do the same things for their children. If parents do exercise with their children regularly, their children would prefer to do the same. Parents have a big impact on children’s actions or choices. Secondly, almost all parents are very supportive of children and they are always willing to help children growing up. Parents would understand children’s interests or strengths, which are very beneficial for their life. In very young age, children don’t understand what they are good at or what they want to do, but parents can provide some opportunities with them to explore new things. Once they find their liking, they enjoy improving skills or gain deeper knowledge. When I was little, my parents let me try new things very often and I could explore what I love to do. It helped me to understand my strengths and later I could choose the career path what I really loved. This experience demonstrates that parents are the most important for children.
    October 2, 2016
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    Essay for TOEFL(English test) Essay for TOEFL(English test) Hello. I am currently studying for writing essays so it would be nice if you could help me to improve my writing skill :) I wrote an essay. If you have time, please have a look and let me know if you find any mistakes! *　*　*　*　*　* Question: People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Attending college is a great experience in life. People go to college for various purposes. In my opinion, there are 2 major reasons which I will explore in the following essay. First, people attend college to expand their opportunities. When people go to college, they would meet a lot of people from different countries or cities. Through communication with them, students would be able to learn many new points of view for the world. For example, I entered a college and I met a lot of people who I had never met or communicate with before. One of my classmates was working full time while studying and one was a mother who was taking care of a baby while attending a college. In high school, I did not have these chances to talk to people with different backgrounds. Through this experience, I learned many things from them and this experience would be very beneficial for my life. Second, college gives people better chances to succeed. Some professions require getting specific degree or course. If you want to become a doctor you need to go to medical school to meet the requirement for the certificate. When people graduate from college, they have better chance to become professions they wish to be. Moreover, they would be able to get a better position in a company or get a higher salary. I started working full time after I graduated from high school. A few years later, I wanted to change my career and increase my skills so I decided to go to college. Through lectures and discussions in college, I gained many new pieces of knowledge and skills that need to develop my career. After graduated from college, I could get a better job and now I am very satisfied with my achievements. In conclusion, I feel strongly that colleges help people to expand their opportunities and chances for better life.
    October 2, 2016
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