Question:
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

People have their own preferences what kind of cities they want to live in. Choosing a place you live in is a big life changing decision, making so that people need to think about it carefully. Both Living in a small town and living in or a big city each have advantages and disadvantages.
When you choose to live in a small city, you will be able to enjoy nature and vast have more space. Also, it is easy to get along with people live in a small town. and It will make you feel like a family member.
On the other hand, living in a big city is exciting. You can get many opportunities, such as for your career and education. In a big city, there are many companies and schools so that you can choose the right place to work or study. Moreover, most of the big cities have advanced transportation systems which will take you anywhere you want easily.

If I have to choose a place to live in, I prefer to live in a big city and I feel this way for 2 reasons.
First, as I said, I will have many job opportunities when I live in a big city. For example, I have been working for an Information Technology company and if you live in a small town, it would be difficult to find job openings. In a small town, job openings are extremely limited and there is no big company there so I will not be able to make enough money to take care of my family.
Secondly, school in a small town does not provide a variety of degrees or diplomas. If they do not teach the subject you want to pursue, you need to move out of a town. Also, a small town has a small population of fewer young people and children so that they will not be able to they won't have an advanced facility which is a big disadvantage for children.

In conclusion, I prefer to live in a big city because of many opportunities of educations and careers which will lead a fulfilling life.

Overall pretty good. Some parts sound sort of unnatural and repetitive but the meaning was mostly clear and you had good vocabulary.

Essay for TOEFL(English test)

Second, schools in a small town does not tend to provide a variety of degrees or diplomas. If they do not teach the subject you want to pursue, you need to move out of a the town. Also, a small town has a small population of young people and children so that they will would not be able to have an advanced education facility which is a big disadvantage for children.

In conclusion, I would prefer to live in a big city because of the many opportunities of in educations and for careers which will would lead a fulfilling life.