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Diary
Hello there!
I have decided to write a diary in English in order to register my memories and also to pratice the language. Considering the major objective here is praticing the English, I will put down here some of my reports in order to get some corrections.
Since it is part of a diary, it will be basically about my every day issues. Let's go ;)
November 17th, 2016
I didn't have much time to write yesterday, since it was a kind of rush. Two of my coworkers are off in these days. One of them went off on vacations, and the another one went on medical leave because she had surgery and now she is recovering, which means there is more work for us.
Yesterday , after work, I watched a play called ''Monster Woman''. It is a part of a theatre event of my town called ''Fenata'', and was basically about prejudices. There was just one actor on the stage and the play was brilliant!
About my trip, I still thinking about where I'm going. Going back to USA seems to be a nice idea. I've seen some photos of Hawaii and it seems to be a paradise. Maybe it can be part of my next trip.
I have no sure if ''dismissed'' is the right word here, since she still having the job. The thing is she went through a surgery and will need to take some days off for healing.0 votedNovember 18, 20163- Les romans La culture rapide prévient que les romans soit bonne littérature. Les auteurs écrivent pour la bienfait des gens qui ne se soucient pas de bonne littérature. En effet, nous avons perdu l'amour de la langue. Si c'est de belle littérature ou pas, ce n'est pas important. A cause de l'indifférence de la population sur la littérature, les auteurs ne lisent plus. Comment un écrivain peut-il écrire bonne littérature s'il ne lit jamais? En générale, les auteurs n'écrivent pas avec leurs imagination. Ils écrivent afin que les gens n'ont pas besoin de penser en lisant la lecteur pour comprendre. Mais il n'est pas trop tard pour sauver les romans. Il y en a encore des auteurs qui écrivent avec une appréciation pour la littérature.November 18, 201670
- La Parure Avant que l'événement qui a changé sa vie pour toujours, Mathilde Loisel était une femme très fière. Toute sa vie elle pensait qu'elle aurait dû être comme une princesse ̶ riche, puissante, aimable avec toutes les gens respectables, et mariée d'un gentilhomme parfait. Or, Mathilde n'avait pas de la vie parfaite, mais elle n'avait pas d'un vie très dur. Son homme était sympa et sensible, même si elle s'est conduit ridiculement. Ils avaient un appartement confortable et même une bonne. En dépit de tout de ça, elle n'était pas contente. Comme résultat de perdre la parure, Mme Loisel est devenue plus humble et plus reconnaissante de ses possessions. Mme Loisel a beaucoup changé pendant les occurrences de cette histoire. Au début de l'histoire, elle était très égoïste et pessimiste. Rien ne l'a plaît, même la balle. Mais après qu'elle a perdu la parure, elle est devenue plus humble et plus contente. Pendant les dix longe ans qu'ils ont travaillé payer tous les dettes, Mathilde a beaucoup travaillé. Elle a aidé son mari avec le fardeau de cette obligation. Elle n'a pas seulement l'aidé un peu, mais elle a travaillé jusqu'à ses mains sont devenues rouges et rugueux. Elle a âgé afin de ressembler à une vielle femme. Sa beauté, sa jeunesse, tout qu'elle a apprécié auparavant, c'était tout fini. Or, parce que tout qu'elle pensait était important étaient perdu, maintenant, elle pouvait être plus reconnaissante de ses possessions. On ne peux pas réalise tous les avantages d'une situation avant qu'il est perdu. Elle a appris qu'elle a juste ceux qu'elle a besoin. Mathilde Loisel a appris être plus humble et plus reconnaissante de ses possessions. Elle n'a pas été si égoïste ou si pessimiste. Elle est devenue contente et gentil. Même avec les situations difficile, on peut croître en caractère.September 24, 201640
Dreams
Blind people dream. The people become blind after of birth can see images in their dreams. If the people born blind can't see images but have dreams that involve other senses.People who are blind dream. People who become blind after birth can see images in their dreams. If they are born blind, they can't see images but have dreams that involve other senses.
Absolutely everyone dreams. Only there is extreme cases where people don't dream. But if you think you don't dreams, you are just forgetting them .Absolutely everyone dreams. There are only very extreme cases where people don't dream. But if you think you don't dream, you probably just forget your dreams.
Very good! The first correction I made (people who are blind vs. blind people) is not a grammatical correction. Where I live (and I'm sure other places!), people are very careful not to define people by their disabilities. It is more polite to say "people who are xxx" rather than "xxx people." There's a little cultural lesson for you! You write very well, and that was also very interesting! :)
0 votedAugust 22, 20161The incredible feeling after having viewed a short video
having viewed sounds awkward here. maybe just "after viewing a short video."
I always improve my English listening through veiwing some English vedioes especially whose subtitles capture my attention.I improve my ability to understand English by viewing English videos, especially those with titles that catch my attention. or I always try to improve...
The video I had seen today is talking about how to overcome when we feel shattered.The speaker offered some great tips in this vedio and that really useful and powerful for me.
The video I watched today was talking about how to persevere even when we feel shattered. The speaker offered some great tips in this video that were really useful. It spoke powerfully to me!
I can't help but imaging that my ex-boyfriends was cheating on me about 3 years ago.My little world was broken down at that time.I could not believe I had such a day he was cheating on me. So, how did I go through it ? Maybe it is time to cure my broken heart and made me forget clearly as time went day by day.I couldn't help but wonder if my ex-boyfriend was cheating on me about three years ago. My world was falling apart. I could not believe that he would cheat on me! So how did I make it through this rough time? Maybe time healed my broken heart and made me forget.
To wrap this up,I have to focus on what wonderful things happen to me in this current moment,and I hope that everyone would go through obstacles fast.To wrap this up, I should focus on the wonderful things happening to me now. I hope that everyone will be able to overcome their obstacles quickly.
A lot of the "corrections" I added were not because of incorrect grammar. I simply re-wrote things the way I would have written it. Many of the things you wrote made sense, but were not phrased well. When I read your note, I could definitely understand what you were saying, it just made more sense to write it differently. You write very well! If you have any specific questions, feel free to message me!
0 votedAugust 22, 20161COMPUTERS IN OUR EVERYDAY LIVES
In my free time , I used to make some repairs on my computer, or simply PC (personal computer).It´s kind of a hobby. In fact, I studied Computer Science a very long time ago.
Nowadays, computers are part of our daily lives.They have an expressive effect in almost everything we do.Can you imagine the world without computers? I think it would be a chaos today.Let me try to explain why.
When we buy groceries at a supermarket, for example, a computer is used with laser and barcode technology to scan the price of each item and present a total of your bill.Barcoding items such as clothes, food and books require a computer to create the barcode labels and maintain the inventory.Some computers are connected by a mainframe, a kind of a header computer. It keeps all of the data safe.
Most TV ads and many movies use graphics produced by a computer.In big hospitals, bedside terminals connected to the hospital´s main computer allow doctors to type orders for blood tests and to schedule surgeries.
All banks use the computers to look after their customer´s accounts.In libraries, bookshops and universities the PC helps us to find the book we want as quickly as possible.
So, let's celebrate the computer in our daily lives.Very good! The plural of life is lives (I know, it's confusing!). Make sure your subjects and verbs agree! Other than that, it was very, very good!
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