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COMPUTER IN OUR EVERYDAY LIFES In my free times, I used to make some repairs on my computer, or simply PC (personal computer).It´s kind of a hobby. In fact, I studied Computer Science a very long time ago. Nowadays, computer are part of our daily lifes.They have an expressive effect in almost everything we do.Can you imagine the world without computers? I think it would be a chaos today.Let me try to explain why. When we buy groceries at a supermarket, for example, a computer is used with laser and barcode technology to scan the price of each item and present a total of your bill.Barcoding items such as clothes, food and books require a computer to create the barcode labels and maintain the inventory.Some computers are connected by a mainframe, a kind of a header computer. It keeps safe all the data. Most TV ads and many movies use graphics produced to a computer.In big hospitals, bedside terminals connected to the hospital´s main computer allow doctors to type orders for blood tests and to schedule surgeries. All banks use the computers to look after their customer´s accounters.In labraries, bookshops and universities the PC help us to find the book we want as quickly as possible. So, lets celebrate the computer in our daily lifes.

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COMPUTER IN OUR EVERYDAY LIFES

In my free times, I used to make some repairs on my computer, or simply PC (personal computer).It´s kind of a hobby. In fact, I studied Computer Science a very long time ago.
Nowadays, computers are part of our daily life's lives. They have an impact on expressive effect in almost everything we do.Can you imagine the world without computers? I think it would be a chaos today.Let me try to explain why.
When we buy groceries at a supermarket, for example, a computer is used with laser and barcode technology to scan the price of each item and present a total of your bill. on the receipt. (bill is just for restaurants) Barcoding items such as clothes, food and books requires a computer to create the barcode labels and maintain the inventory.Some computers are connected by a mainframe, a kind of a header boss computer/server.  It keeps safe all the data safe. 
Most TV ads and many movies use graphics produced to  by a computer.In big hospitals, bedside terminals connected to the hospital´s main computer allow doctors to type orders for blood tests and to schedule surgeries.
All banks use the computers to look after their customer´s customers' accounters  accounts. labrarieslibraries, bookshops and universities use the PC computers to help us find the book we want as quickly as possible.
So, lets celebrate the computer in our daily lifes.lives.
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COMPUTERS IN OUR EVERYDAY LIVES

In my free time , I used to make some repairs on my computer, or simply PC (personal computer).It´s kind of a hobby. In fact, I studied Computer Science a very long time ago.
Nowadays, computers are part of our daily lives.They have an expressive effect in almost everything we do.Can you imagine the world without computers? I think it would be a chaos today.Let me try to explain why.
When we buy groceries at a supermarket, for example, a computer is used with laser and barcode technology to scan the price of each item and present a total of your bill.Barcoding items such as clothes, food and books require a computer to create the barcode labels and maintain the inventory.Some computers are connected by a mainframe, a kind of a header computer. It keeps all of the data safe.
Most TV ads and many movies use graphics produced by a computer.In big hospitals, bedside terminals connected to the hospital´s main computer allow doctors to type orders for blood tests and to schedule surgeries.
All banks use the computers to look after their customer´s accounts.In libraries, bookshops and universities the PC helps us to find the book we want as quickly as possible.
So, let's celebrate the computer in our daily lives.

Very good! The plural of life is lives (I know, it's confusing!). Make sure your subjects and verbs agree! Other than that, it was very, very good!

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