The incredible feeling after having viewed a short video

having viewed sounds awkward here. maybe just "after viewing a short video."

I improve my ability to understand English by viewing English videos, especially those with titles that catch my attention. or I always try to improve...

The video I had seen today is talking about how to overcome when we feel shattered.The speaker offered some great tips in this vedio and that really useful and powerful for me.

The video I watched today was talking about how to persevere even when we feel shattered. The speaker offered some great tips in this video that were really useful. It spoke powerfully to me!

I can't help but imaging that my ex-boyfriends was cheating on me about 3 years ago.My little world was broken down at that time.I could not believe I had such a day he was cheating on me. So, how did I go through it ? Maybe it is time to cure my broken heart and made me forget clearly as time went day by day.

I couldn't help but wonder if my ex-boyfriend was cheating on me about three years ago. My world was falling apart. I could not believe that he would cheat on me! So how did I make it through this rough time? Maybe time healed my broken heart and made me forget.

To wrap this up,I have to focus on what wonderful things happen to me in this current moment,and I hope that everyone would go through obstacles fast.

To wrap this up, I should focus on the wonderful things happening to me now. I hope that everyone will be able to overcome their obstacles quickly.

A lot of the "corrections" I added were not because of incorrect grammar. I simply re-wrote things the way I would have written it. Many of the things you wrote made sense, but were not phrased well. When I read your note, I could definitely understand what you were saying, it just made more sense to write it differently. You write very well! If you have any specific questions, feel free to message me!