My diary on 8/23/2016

I found I have some problems stating writing about simple things, so I'd like to record what I did today.

Today, I went to the local hospital because I have felt the a pain in my chest since June. I forgot to take bring my physical examination report that I had got from during my last medical examination, but the doctor was very kind and he said that I just need more rest. However, I'm actually currently on the summer break and I sleep like all day. How can I have bad rest not be resting enough? It's very confusing. Then I used Didi, China's equivalent of Uber, to go to the local bureau of human resource and social insurance to apply for the a 'citizen card'. but only to be However, I was told I could only get the card after I get the medical insurance here. So I used the Didi to call a cab again to come go back home. I only spent 5 yuan on all the distance on the entire trip, which was incredibly cheap!

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Very good job!  Just a few corrections that make it flow better.  I understood everything perfectly.  Keep up the good work!

My first time on Italki!

My first attempt at learning English on Italki was not good. I had waited for about an hour and tried contacting the teacher that I h.
It was useless because the teacher didn't show up. It's disappointed me. But However, I'll never give up on this.  I'll try another time again.

Have a good day everybody.
If there is a mistake for in what I wrote above, please help me fixing it.
Thank you a lot.
: )

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Good luck with your second try at English!  It looks like you have a good base knowledge to build off of.

Practice day 2

I will try to write here every day because next month I will start my English course and I need to practice a lot!

I saw some profiles here and so many people are learning two or three languages at the same time that I was thinking that I can do this it too! But which languages? Italian, Spanish, or French? I'm leaning towards French since it is such a beautiful language.
Here in Abu Dhabi, the movie theater plays movies with Arabic and French subtitles. I always try to understand something, but it is very difficult! I will try to learn English and French.  Let's see what happens!

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Make sure you always capitalize the name of languages in English.  They are considered "proper nouns" and proper nouns always start with a capital letter.  Good job and good luck with the English and French!

Practice day 3

Lets practice! :)

In Brazil, my last job was as a support analyst.  Before that, I worked as a teacher. When I was a teacher, I had a very easy routine:  there were only a few students and I spent most part of the day talking with the another teacher her name is named Maria.  We became very close friends and I learned so much with her.
My last job was completely different. I worked 8 hours per day and every minute there I was working hard! I had to meet very ignorant customers, and sometimes I cried, but with this job I learned so much and grew as a professional and as a person.
Right now, I don't have a job, and this is very complicate hard for me because I have worked since I was 17 and staying at home is not what I want, but I hope to find a good job soon!

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Great job, Taiana.  Some of the changes recommended above were stylistic.  In other words, some of what you wrote may not have been incorrect, but the changes make it flow more naturally.  Overall, really good writing.  Good luck with the job search!

Traffic network Transportation Systems in London

From Last Friday, the Night Tube launched on the Central and Victoria lines and it will be running all night on Fridays and Saturdays. There is a train approximately every 10 to 20 minutes. Under the circumstances, with the night buses are already running, I wonder if there is even a demand for the Night Tube, but I am interested in the effects.
I tried Santander Cycles which I can hire a bike in London for the first time.  It is a service that allows you to rent a bicycle. There are a lot of docking stations for a bikes in London. It is affordable for me to hire a bike: from it costs as little as 2 pounds for 24 hours. ((I can hire a bike any number of times if I hire within 30 minutes at once)). I think the that cycling around London under a good during nice weather feels good!
I felt think that the traffic networks transportation systems in London such as  (i.e., buses, tubes, and cycles) are more developed than the ones in Japan.

**I'm not exactly sure what meaning you had for the sentence between the double parentheses (( )), so I left it as is.

Good job!

I want to learn English.我想学英语。

1. I am a beautiful Chinese girl.  I am not happy with my current job.

1.我是一个美丽的中国女孩。我对我现在的工作不满意。


2. I think that if I learn English well, I can find a good job.

2.我认为我学好英语了，就可以换一个美好的工作。

3. You can do whatever you want to do.  

3.可以做自己想做的事情。

Photography

Good evening everyone !

Today, I want to talk about photography and videos and about how progress in both fields can improve your life in general and help you create great memories !

I started learning photography when I was nineteen years old. I discovered that I liked to take pictures via the popular app Instagram. There were many years when there weren't many people that used the app.

So, I started taking some pictures with my old phone, an Iphone 4. At first, the pictures weren't really good, but gradually I began thinking about how to take better pictures:  which angle, color, filter, light, etc. would be best ?"

Quickly, I realized that my first camera (my phone) wasn't appropriate and that it didn't have the necessary functions to take great photos and allow me to progress in the field.

The next day, I went to a photography shop to speak to the salesman to see what he advice he had. He showed me a Nikon D3100, Nikon's starter camera. I wound up buying it as well as a tripod and a camera bag for the lens and others accessories.

Equipped with my new camera, I was able to start taking better pictures in terms of image quality.  I also watched various tutorials about several photography subjects to further improve my skill level and to learn how to take cool pictures. The best thing I did done at that time was to learn how to use Lightroom and Photoshop.

Many amateurs in photography don't know or don't want to know how to use these programs. Some people say that the pictures don't need to be edited. However, I think this is a big mistake. Even if we currently have digital camaras, the untreated (raw) picture needs to be edited. This process was even done by older-era photographers, who edited B&W pictures by retouching lights and shadows.

Another benefit of taking pictures is the ability to make photo albums. Personally, I make one per year with the best pictures of the year. You can also publish yours shots on websites specializing in photography like Flickr/500px or join a photography group.

If there are photographers here, let me know.  If you want, you can send me a link with your photos/blogs/photography website profile! :)

Thanks for reading.  There are certainly a lot of mistakes due to the fact that this is technical subject with a lot of technical words.

Hope you have a great day!

Books!

Hi guys! I am seventeen years old and love reading books very much. It is one of the best way of entertaining yourself and spending free time when you can travel through the different worlds without even leaving your house! Classic romances are really good, especially Russian one. I love Tolstoy and Dostoevsky very much. "The Brothers Karamazov" is the best book I have ever read. I think this book will never die. Now I am interested in reading "The Stranger" by Albert Camus. What can you say about that one? Is it interesting? Please, also tell me, what is your favorite book and why?

(The underlined part is just a suggestion of a good addition.  It would be perfectly correct even without it.)

Great job!  =)  I'm a big fan of Russian literature as well.  I haven't read any Tolstoy (yet!), but I have read some of Dostoevsky's novels as well as Bulgakov.  Any other recommendations?  I also really like "The Stranger" by Camus.  It's a great book.  It's considered one of the classic works of existentialism.  I read it in English and Arabic and hope to be able to read it in the original French one day.