Practice day 3
Lets practice! :)
In Brazil my last job was support analyst, and before I worked as a teacher. When I was a teacher I had a very easy routine, a few students and spend most part of the day talking with the another teacher her name is Maria, we became very close friends and I learned so much with her.
My last job was completely different, I worked 8 hours per day and every minute there I was working hard! I had to meet very ignorant customers, and sometimes I cried, but with this Job I learned so much and grew as a professional and person.
Right now I don't have a job, and this is very complicate for me because I worked since 17 and staying at home its not what I want, but I hope to find a good job soon!
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Practice day 3
Lets practice! :)In Brazil, my last job was as a support analyst. Before that, I worked as a teacher. When I was a teacher, I had a very easy routine: there were only a few students and I spent most part of the day talking with the another teacher her name is named Maria. We became very close friends and I learned so much with her.
My last job was completely different. I worked 8 hours per day and every minute there I was working hard! I had to meet very ignorant customers, and sometimes I cried, but with this job I learned so much and grew as a professional and as a person.
Right now, I don't have a job, and this is very complicate hard for me because I have worked since I was 17 and staying at home is not what I want, but I hope to find a good job soon!
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Great job, Taiana. Some of the changes recommended above were stylistic. In other words, some of what you wrote may not have been incorrect, but the changes make it flow more naturally. Overall, really good writing. Good luck with the job search!
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Practice day 3
Lets practice! :)In Brazil, my last job was a support analyst, and before that I worked as a teacher. When I was a teacher I had a very easy routine, a few students and spent most part of the day talking with the another teacher whose name was Maria, we became very close friends and I learned so much with her.
My last job was completely different, I worked 8 hours per day and every minute there I was working hard! I had to meet very ignorant customers, and sometimes I cried, but with this job I learned so much and grew as a professional and as a person.
Right now I don't have a job, and this is very complicated for me because I have worked since I was 17 and staying at home is not what I want, but I hope to find a good job soon!
Hello Taiana,
Nice text with just a few small corrections. I am sure you will find a job soon. Just don't give up.
Best wishes
Bob
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