Life Experience

In my eyes, my father is so adorable, because he can give me advice and help me to make the best decisions. My father has experienced a lot in life. When he graduated from college, his first job was to work in an office, but he found it was too boring to sit in the office all day, so he decided to quit and started traveling  to many places. My father has traveled to many places; traveling opened his eyes (better to say: broadened his horizons); afterward  he went back home to find another job he liked. When he met my mother, he thought it was time to settle down. I am so fascinated by his experiences, I couldn’t help but think, "what if I had gone with him?" I would have met lots of new people and seen beautiful scenery. I want to live my life like my father. When the time comes, I will travel too.

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Deciding how to return to my hometown during Chinese New Year

I work in Shanghai. My hometown is Taiyuan city, Shanxi Provide which is in the middle of China.

I have 3 ways to go back return to my hometown in for Chinese New year.

1. By airplane. I can easily to get tickets and it only takes me 2 hours. However, the fare is too expensive. I need to pay at least 2500 yuan per passenger. That means that I need pay 7500 yuan for my kid, my wife and myself. I don’t want to spend too much money on the trip.
2. By Didi (similar to Uber). With this car-share app,  up to 5 people can ride in one car; however the trip will very be uncomfortable because I have to sit in a very small seat for 16 hours (or longer if there is bad traffic).
3. By train. It’s the cheapest way, I can sleep in the sleeper carriage the whole time. The train in the trip will take me 13 hours. The ticket price is 500 yuan per passenger, and I don’t need pay for my kid who is just 3 years old,

So I've decided to go back by train.

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The mist is covering the city

It’s a happy day because I had over all the have finished my final exam and I'm ready to start my vacation.
But (shouldn't use "but" at the beginning of a sentence in formal writing) Unfortunately the weather is so weird today. The heavy fog cover in the city that looks like the that scene in the movie “THE MIST”.
Maybe the monster will come out from of the mist. Haha -  I know it is not possible.
I hope the mist will fade disappear in the afternoon because I want to jogging in the mountain.

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